Evi

Welcome! ^^ Enjoy your time here at YWS. Feel free to PM me if you need any help finding your way around or if you would like a critique on ...

Okay, people. Anyone in need of a review?

Equipped with Melodies For a contest, Shina, dear. ^^ It's in Other Poetry. If you have any alternative title suggestions as well, I would love to hear them. Thanks!

I also much preferred the star button at the top, but on both top and bottom would be excellent. Thanks!

Welcome to YWS! I'm Evi; you can PM me if you need any help finding your way around, or would like your writing critiqued. Check out the chat-room to meet ...

Just looking at this discussion, I'm not sure if YWS is ready right now to do away with the Instructor and Greeter positions. Essentially, the groups have done their jobs-- ...

The kid turned swiftly around, startled by my voice, and I found his illuminated, startled baby-blue eyes staring at me. Too many adjectives and adverbs cluttering up this sentence, especially ...

Haha, I'm probably not the best judge of this, but I was quite pleased with Carbonation and Katies . Although, (yes, I'm an egomaniac, I know) I was pretty happy ...

On Amy's note, we could keep the groups and just make them open groups about Greeting and Critiquing, for people to go to when they want suggestions in either area. ...

I'm honestly not sure what the difference is going to be between badges and colors, besides the nomination process. I'm not sure who said it earlier, but I agree that ...

This is written well. I think you should probably go ahead and rate this 12+ because of sexual references, though. she wore ample skirts and shirts, bathed after everyone else ...

I very proudly became an atheist aged six or seven, when I was introduced to Walking With Dinosaurs (*RAWR*), and began questioning the religious school I went to with 'If ...

Inspiration: The Bohemian by William-Adolphe Bouguereau For Hannah's Art Imitates Art contest; Entry #1 . hurry along, now—this is no place for song; just a swampy mess of bargains and ...

I echo Sureal's thing about letting the story settle for a while. Also, when I edit a long project of mine, I kept another blank document in Microsoft Word open ...

Oh, it kills me to see people hating The Westing Game . D=