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Hola! First of all, check out this tutorial on dialogue punctuation . You need to brush up on the grammar aspects of dialogue a bit, but that's easy to fix. ...

This is my most-linked-to tutorial while I'm writing reviews; I constantly refer people to it. ;) Good article, Dems!

Happy birthday! ^_~

Because I said so.

By the time I hit 17-18, you guys will be so sick of me.

Hey! Sorry for the delay, again. Firstly! For future reference, if any of the other chapters are similar to this, I would appreciate a warning in your PM request to ...

Hi! I thought this looked very interesting, so it's going to be my first critique on the entire site! You should be vey flattered. I always thought dying would be ...

Sorry for the delay, Shina, dear. I've been a bit overwhelmed as of late. I know she sees me, she always could. Semi-colon, not comma, because both phrases on each ...

Hey! I loved the powerful emotion behind this. It comes off as really strong, really passionate, and very raw. The raw emotion is good in some ways (it fuels the ...

Sorry, Nate. You're hereby excommunicated.

The novel is exciting. :P It's the big adventure, the ultimate goal, to publish a best-selling novel. It's not sensible , no, to jump straight into crazy attempts at a ...

Thanks for the request, Jigs! Sorry for any delay. In moments – a tortured eternity– it was over. We stood a foot apart, huffing, red in the face. I felt ...

This was great, Dems! ^^ And, while I'm here, let me thank you profusely for the critiques you've given me recently. ;) and shoetips are drowned by smell of anticipation ...

Hey Jasmine! The thing about repetitive poems like this is that it loses a lot of its surprise element, and, unfortunately, it loses some of the things that make a ...

Haha, no problem. YWS Fanfiction is writing that uses elements from this website-- members as characters, YWS inside jokes, literature and community forums for the setting, etc. ;)