Evi

Woot woot!

Y'know, I think we should leave it like this, actually. :P

Hey Blue Africa. :D This is going to sound disjointed, but bear with me. The part about him forgetting to take off his clothes before getting into the shower amused ...

I feel like this should be a poem. Not just because it's formatted in lines line one, but because it has none of the aspects of a story, even the ...

I'm going to jump right in, but I haven't read previous installments so my comments will be more about style than plot content! First of all, check the little button ...

Hey Vitamin Cakes! ^_^ Evi here! Matt and I sit around the fire that we started, the heltite, caused by various radioactive waste from the orbital bombarment made the fire ...

Here as requested, Ellie. :D For a school project, I'm sure this is fine, and I'm sure you'll get a decent grade on this. But as far as actual poetry ...

Hey again Dai! Great to see you've edited. An adjustment of her sleeping body set it precariously on her perch But "it" do you mean her body? Might want to ...

First of all, love the avvie! xD Kiki's Delivery Service was one of my favorite movies. I understand the message and emotion behind this, and I can definitely appreciate them. ...

Hey Shy, welcome to YWS! You should start reviewing around the site-- you'll get more reviews on your own work. ;) This is short and simple, and while that can ...

Hey Dream. :D it’s large hands stuck permanently at the 12. its is possessive; "it's" is a contraction for "it is". There are other grammatical/punctuation mis-haps I'd watch out for-- ...

Hey, Etc, welcome to YWS! So this was cute, but it confused me a bit. Writer's Block is generally when a writer can't think of anything, right? So if someone ...

Okay! Sorry this took so long, Lena-- for some reason my notifications didn't tell me you had responded to my wall post. >_> Darn technology. Anyway, autobiographies scare me, because ...

Also, great teamwork and dedication from all the teams (*cough* particularly Power Rangers: YWS Force *cough*) and may the competition continue! :D

You deserve it, Dream. :D Great to have you back.