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Re: Post Your Pic Here [6]
Everyone looks fabulous! I went all ditzy-girly with my friends at the mall (I know, so hard to believe coming from me) and we raided the dress department to try ...
Feb 7, 2010 -
Re: Unfamiliar Ceilings
Hey! I'm Evi. I liked your poem. You have some very nice images, and everything seems to flow together very cohesively. a jaded sky sheds it’s pearly blue skin Typo ...
Feb 7, 2010 -
Re: A Seasonal Answer
Aloha, Gal. Here I am, ready to try and extract cohesive and/or tangible meaning from your glorious melting pot of poetic phrases! I look to Deathand ask her why, she ...
Feb 3, 2010 -
Re: Report A Site Bug
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Feb 2, 2010 -
Re: Hey everyone! :)
Hello Darien! I quite like that name. *muses* I'm Evi, but I have an abundance of nicknames, so call me whatever you like. ;) I've been playing the piano for ...
Jan 31, 2010 -
Re: Spirit Sword- chapter 1
Hello! Hope you're enjoying yourself on YWS. All I could hear was my own breathing. Missed a word! ^_^ You’re welcome. Now you need to go and visit the Elder,” ...
Jan 31, 2010 -
Re: Lady Death 4 (Edited!)
Hello again! ;) “You must be Noah,” She she said softly . It wasn’t a question. He didn’t reply. “I’m Mildred. I’m the one who wants to adopt you.” “Don’t ...
Jan 31, 2010 -
Re: Run with Blood Chapter 1: Wet
Hello Giant! I'm Evi. I hope this review is helpful. I rested my head on my desk, my mind drifted away from work and into what happened only 1 year ...
Jan 31, 2010 -
Re: The Escalating Involvment- Chapter 1-3
Hello! “Where are we going,” I stop walking and tap his shoulder waiting. His feet slow, turning to look at me, he speaks “Does it matter where we’re going,” his ...
Jan 31, 2010 -
Re: Relive Ch. 1 Pt. 1
Hello Emi! Evi here. This was the home of Death, the plane the dead cross on there way to whatever afterlife awaited them. Since the two other verbs in the ...
Jan 31, 2010 -
Re: Thunder (prologue & chpt. 1) foul language
Hello Skittles! I feel like I've read this before, but I can't remember, so bear with me. ;) The tire wasn’t deflating slowly enough to where she kept going. You ...
Jan 29, 2010 -
Re: Three Things/You're It
Hello, youreit! Evi here. What a wonderful way to start a morning, I thought sarcastically as I picked myself up off the floor. This is a wonderful sentence to open ...
Jan 29, 2010 -
Re: YWS Super Reviewing Bash on January 31, 2010
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Jan 29, 2010 -
Re: Lady Death 3
Here! Finally! *pants* The boy’s eyes lit up like little suns. “Do you think he will want?” Awkwardly phrased dialogue from Cole. Will want what? For Noah and Cole to ...
Jan 28, 2010 -
Re: Need assistance.
In addition to what Rosey said (editing the text so it's deleted and changing the title) you can also lock your threads in the literary forums. Go to the bottom ...
Jan 25, 2010
