Evi

Hello! Evi here. So, you tackled a very deep and interesting subject here. It seems like the bare bones of a philosophical essay of some sort, but since you put ...

It'll take some getting used to, sure, but I'm excited to see the badges. ;)

Hey Born! Sorry for the delay. ;) It was nice that you waited a while between posts, though-- gave me time to catch up! I don't like the gap you ...

*throws confetti* My heroes!

Hello Kammie! Congrats and featured work. This poem had some beautiful, beautiful moments, and as a whole it's hard to critique. But, when looking at individual phrases in here, certain ...

Here as requested! I haven't read any of the other chapters, so I'm going to avoid talking about plot if I can, and focus more of writing style, since that's ...

8/10. I like it. I like what it implies, and the internal issues it shows. But, really, if the character is lamenting the fact that they're an addict, does it ...

Fifteen to twenty minutes for prose, usually, but that depends on how long the piece is and (like Jabs said) how long it takes to read. Sometimes I start a ...

Hello! The previous two reviewers pretty much covered every grammatical issue I could point out, so proofread through this and you might want to check out this tutorial on Dialogue ...

Hello! I'm Evi; nice to meet you! You should proofread your writing before you post it on YWS! It makes things easier on reviewers if there are fewer grammar and ...

Hello Ludicrously Idiotic! The nickname possibilities for your username are endless. Personally, I think I'm going to call you Ludicrio. The small establishment housed coffee, lattes, and cuppa chinos

Rentre á la Maison Other Fiction It's rather long (perhaps too long; I'll appreciate your thoughts on length), so I understand if this takes a while to get to. My ...

Rentre à la Maison: "Come Home" The lamplight was watery and yellow, bright enough to just barely illuminate our table. Across from me, Anya pursed her cherry-glossed lips. Once, when ...

*poof!*

I feel guilty when I forget about a request and it takes forever for me to get to something I promised I'd take a look at, but that's because I ...