Evi

Hello, Jiggity! This is solidly written as a whole, so I'm going to focus a bit on the technicalities of the piece. it is quiet here. This seems to contradict ...

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Oh, right; I forgot about COPPA. Still, though, I think removing the age limit is a good idea. And, yes, I mailed in a signed permission slip. ;) My birthday ...

Aww. When they first came out, I had the Reviewer II badge, and now it's gone. But that's understandable, I suppose, since I never had five nominations in the first ...

Here as requested! Sorry it took so long, dear. Feel free to bug me about it next time I forget. Surprisingly, it hasn't yellowed much at all since it was ...

Hello TTT! I'm going to do a blanket review on all three parts so far, since they're essentially the same story. Warning: I'm going to be honest. ;) You said ...

Congratulations!

Hey, Bear. I enjoyed this very much. Normally I'd harp on about not much happening, and how a first chapter needs more of a hook, but I think the subtle ...

Hey, Kaedee. Not much to work with here, eh? It's written well, though. Well, first of all, I'd like to suggest that you avoid Prologues like the plague. This works ...

I say that the best way to learn how to write is to read a lot, and that goes for grammar too. But, if I see errors in punctuation, I ...

Yay. =D As a member who wanted to join when she was twelve, and had to mail in a signed permission slip, this makes me happy.

Whatever you do, don't mention that his eyes are dreamy or he's "just too perfect". Have your MC get angry at him occasionally-- fights are realistic in relationships, and not ...

Hello Antasea! Just so you know, these kind of updates don't go in the literary forums. If you would like to make a personal thank-you to those who critiqued you, ...

Hello Maria! I'm Evi. First of all: you might want to check out this tutorial on Dialogue Punctuation. Those dashes are unneeded. Also! Don't use ellipses (those ... things) in ...

Hello! Sorry for the delay. Poetry reviews aren't my best, so please take this all with a grain of salt. Galerius said a lot of what I would've said, so ...