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Haha, this is good. I enjoyed it immensely. *likes* Since this story is already very good as a whole, I'm going to comment on some of the really little things ...

Looks great so far, Nate! I'm working on a couple of projects right now, but an article is on my list, so hopefully I'll have something to submit pretty soon. ...

Hey, whatever constructive criticism you want to bring to YWS, be our guest. ;) We're working on improving critiquing standards-- the Threads[/i] are where you can nominate people for badges, ...

Hey Gal. My problem with this is that it's not something that I'm going to remember. It's like taking a five-minute stroll through a familiar park on your way somewhere ...

Hello, Zerog! I'm Evi, and I enjoyed this. It's written very well. “I’m good, thanks.” He responded when the waitress began growing uneasy under his cold stare. In the paragraph ...

If you remember who the PMs were from, you could always ask those people to re-send them to you, because the messages would still be in their "sent" box.

Someone should totally do regular YWS member interviews. Makes me miss Linx. D:

Hello Bailey! I, too, love your avatar. ^_^ In the first stanza-- how does never-ending rainfall keep the sun from rising? You might be trying to say that, metaphorically, rain ...

So can we write thirty poems on the last day and have that count? Or is it a one-poem-a-day deal?

I might try NaPo again! I'd really like to not do haikus every other day like I did last year, though. :P

Hello Woozey! This is very well-written, and has the potential to be a really moving and powerful piece. I felt a lot of that already-- but there's even more you ...

Me again! Hope you don't mind. ;) Firstly, I don't necessarily suggest you switch Points of View for each chapter. That tends to get confusing for the reading, and just ...

Hello Jokeless Jester! Firstly, listen to everything Wooster said, because it is absolutely right. ;) I'll mention some different things. Wait, before I get ahead of myself, you do at ...

If you're big into poetry, then you'd be better off under Kamas's wing, but if you write more fiction I'd be happy to help you however I could. ;) Although ...

Happy National Poetry Day! I'm here in order to celebrate the occasion; bring on the confetti! The rumbling clouds are crashing down like waves. And I ' m walking on ...