Evi

Moved to Action/Adventure Novels, since this seems like part of a larger project!

Because this is a first chapter, I've moved it to Romantic Novels. ^_^

Here as requested, Flower. ;) No, it doesn't matter, because it doesn't change a thing I still love you, and we still can't be because of this thing inside my ...

Moved from Fantasy Short Stories to Fantasy Novels, since this is a first chapter. ;)

It's me again! The small room is filled with many clothes, costumes, hats, and jewelry. In one corner sits a bureau with make-up scattered on it. Different sized shoes littered ...

Here as requested! Sorry for the delay. I stood in the small, grassy meadow. Tiny orange flowers softly illuminated my vision. The bubbling of a nearby creek filled my ears ...

None of the threads in the new novel sub-forums have the "Like" option. This could be intentional, but I thought I'd mention it anyway. And none of the threads in ...

Hey Sophie, I'm Evi! ^_^ Thanks you for using my WRFF thread. “A shame,” he murmured as he clutched her chin and tilted her head this way and that . ...

Hello! You already have a number of critiques on the other installments, so I'm just going to review this last one. Keep in mind I haven't read the beginning, so ...

Holy heck, that's impressive!

Congratulations, Esme!

Hello! I'm Evi. my face was twisted with melancholy Here's a good example for me to point out showing vs telling, which is something you'll hear in YWS critiques all ...

Personally, I like the way things are ordered now (who needs logic?) but I'm all for the idea of links popping up above the header.

*poof!*

Hey Auteur. For me, the first thing you need to do is chop this paragraph up into smaller paragraphs. Right now it's like being served a twelve pound chunk of ...