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Hannah is my CBF (Critiquing Best Friend) so I couldn't ignore her blog request. ;) Hope you're enjoying the site, Adam! not to miss the night sky's beauty ere the ...

Barrett! You get my 350th review, which shall give me my first blue star! Such an honor, I'm sure. The book I had was pulled off my shelf as a ...

Mochi pointed out the capitalization and numbers already, so I'll focus more on the overall things. :arrow: Grammar and Presentation Like Mochi mentioned, start a new paragraph whenever someone new ...

Nate is still working out some bugs in the novel sub-forums, including the "like" option, so don't worry! It'll be fixed eventually.

Tenyo! Evi here to review. Sam and Kira where already there. Where needs to be "were". Kira had risen onto her tiptoes and tilted back her head to hug Sam, ...

Moved to General Fiction Novels.

Mimi! It's been a while since I've seen you around. ;D Hope you're here to stay for a little bit. Poetry critiques aren't my best, but hopefully this will be ...

Done, done, done, and done!

(Sorry to post again so soon!) I'm pretty sure that threads in the novel sub-forums with zero or one replies aren't showing up under those lists in the "recent additions" ...

Posted twice-- unlocked version to be found here ! (Aspiring, if one is an edited version or something, PM me and I can unlock it.)

Moved from Short Stories to the Historical Fiction Novel sub-forum!

Moved. ^_^

This topic is nearly two years old, vixeyt! Please don't bump old topics; the author has most likely moved on. ;) *locked*

The literary forums are for posting the actual story when you would like critiques. Since this is a summary and not an actual installment, I've moved it to the Writers ...

Hey Skins; here as requested. I haven't read any of the previous installments, so you'll have to bear with me! His voice was more or less drained out by the ...