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Thank you guys so very much, especially since this was such short notice! :D I also wish I had submitted this earlier, but I hadn't been sure I'd be able ...

For the Extra! Extra! contest, based off of National Geographic's recent issue on water. This title is replaceable-- any opinions on that would be welcome. * On my eleventh birthday, ...

Here as requested, Elinor. Sorry it took me so long to get here! I really like this idea and the conflict it expresses, but it's lacking a bit. She smiled ...

;) I go to Catholic K-8 school right now, with approximately 750 students school-wide. There are separate wings for K-2, 3-6, and 7-8, so there's not much interaction in the ...

To clarify, a review is anything you post on someone else's writing that gives them advice or suggestions on how to improve. Here are some good articles on writing helpful ...

Okay! Let me continue. “Why are you still going?” Mariam asks. The red watch is close to Aleksandra’s ear and she hears her friend’s voice very clearly, as if it ...

I know, I know, it took me forever to get here and I fail as a CBF. I express profound amounts of sorrow and implore forgiveness! But it does look ...

Here as requested, Flower! :D So, I didn't like this anywhere near as much as the other poem I critiqued of yours. The idea here has been done a million ...

Hey Tanith. EDIT: I'm going to get someone to move this into Other fiction, if that's okay with you-- it seems more like experimental prose than poetry. EDIT 2: You ...

I'm totally the fountain of youth.

Evi, stop using Internet Explorer. Anyhow, fixed. But quite seriously, dump Internet Explorer ;) Oh, I know. But the Firefox download says my computer doesn't meet the requirements, and I ...

Okay, cool! The reason I asked on your blog if we'd have to be on Facebook to like soemthing is that the "Like on YWS" option is kind of hidden. ...

Welcome to YWS, Gnome! I absolutely adore your username. This was very solid writing. I think your characters were interesting and powerful and the idea behind it intriguing. There was ...

I love Jodi Picoult books as well! ^_^ I've read The Pact, Nineteen Minutes, and My Sister's Keeper, and I think my favorite was The Pact. The only problem I ...

Firstly, I feel that I should warn you that my review will be wildly inferior to Navita's novel-critique! I did skim the comments between you two, though, so hopefully I ...