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Re: Evi's Evaluation Emporium!
*poof!*
May 18, 2010 -
Re: The Battle with Perseus
You like Greek Mythology, huh? :D Awesome. I'm not going to comment on the factual sources of the myths, because, unlike our resident Greek Myth Historian Antigone, I have no ...
May 17, 2010 -
Re: Adventures of the SPEW Gryphon III (Episode I)
Fantastic. This is clearly a work of literary genius. (And I'm liking the fact that I get to give orders. :P)
May 16, 2010 -
Re: Welcome New Members! [2]
Hey FadedPhoto, welcome to YWS! I love your username. ;) Horror, huh? I tried to write one horror story, but I think it was probably less horrifying than I'd intended. ...
May 16, 2010 -
Re: Little Blue Veins
Hey Holly, here as requested! You said you wanted me to review this because of my ever-endearing, gut-the-crap-out-of-this-thing style...so, you asked for it. :P I am going to do line-by-line ...
May 15, 2010 -
Re: One Big Change to the Front Page (and other smaller ones)
Knightley-- On the front page, scroll down to the black and white block under staff picks and to the left of the YWS Facebook thing. It says "New Literary Works" ...
May 14, 2010 -
Re: Starless (rated 12+ for mild language)
Hello! First of all, as this is going to be continued for a larger work, should I move it to General Fiction Novels/Novellas? It doesn't feel complete enough to be ...
May 14, 2010 -
Re: Mediums
Hey Orihobbit! First of all, like Lydia said, I think the title could use some rethinking. It's not about mediums in general, it's about one certain medium: Ink. Ink is ...
May 13, 2010 -
Re: Of Sanity And Sliverware
Very interesting! I appreciate the response and clarification. The problem is that you're not doing your job as an author if it takes 500 extra words to explain what your ...
May 11, 2010 -
Re: Statistics on the front page (do you use it?)
What statistics? EDIT: Right, those statistics. Yeah. Not very often. Kind of never, actually.
May 11, 2010 -
Re: Of Sanity And Sliverware
Hey, I'm Evi. ^_^ Love the title here-- that's what made me click it. Just outside the Common's [Commons'] dining room window, a soupy thick fog danced. Since Common is ...
May 10, 2010 -
Re: Introducing Anthologies
Everything worked fine for me! And this really is quite cool. :D Now I just need to find a whole bunch of stories to put my anthology.
May 9, 2010 -
Re: The Imperial City
Hola! "Do you think this will ever turn into a real crown?" she asked. "A silver circlet with studded diamonds. Or maybe"-Dinah's eyes were distant now-"Maybe a gold one with ...
May 9, 2010 -
Re: The Manger
Dems. You're crazy to think that this sucks and mine is "so much better". xD I don't have time (or material to complain about, actually) for a full critique, but ...
May 9, 2010 -
Re: Leave Your Shoes (2)
I realize how long this is, and I apologize profusely, but YWS won't let me post it in another section because of the 48 hour rule and the deadline is ...
May 8, 2010
