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Evi

  • WRFF Archive Re: Evi's Evaluation Emporium!

    *poof!*

    May 18, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Battle with Perseus

    You like Greek Mythology, huh? :D Awesome. I'm not going to comment on the factual sources of the myths, because, unlike our resident Greek Myth Historian Antigone, I have no ...

    May 17, 2010
  • Science-Fiction Novels Re: Adventures of the SPEW Gryphon III (Episode I)

    Fantastic. This is clearly a work of literary genius. (And I'm liking the fact that I get to give orders. :P)

    May 16, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: Welcome New Members! [2]

    Hey FadedPhoto, welcome to YWS! I love your username. ;) Horror, huh? I tried to write one horror story, but I think it was probably less horrifying than I'd intended. ...

    May 16, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Little Blue Veins

    Hey Holly, here as requested! You said you wanted me to review this because of my ever-endearing, gut-the-crap-out-of-this-thing style...so, you asked for it. :P I am going to do line-by-line ...

    May 15, 2010
  • Information Desk Archive Re: One Big Change to the Front Page (and other smaller ones)

    Knightley-- On the front page, scroll down to the black and white block under staff picks and to the left of the YWS Facebook thing. It says "New Literary Works" ...

    May 14, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Starless (rated 12+ for mild language)

    Hello! First of all, as this is going to be continued for a larger work, should I move it to General Fiction Novels/Novellas? It doesn't feel complete enough to be ...

    May 14, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Mediums

    Hey Orihobbit! First of all, like Lydia said, I think the title could use some rethinking. It's not about mediums in general, it's about one certain medium: Ink. Ink is ...

    May 13, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Of Sanity And Sliverware

    Very interesting! I appreciate the response and clarification. The problem is that you're not doing your job as an author if it takes 500 extra words to explain what your ...

    May 11, 2010
  • Information Desk Archive Re: Statistics on the front page (do you use it?)

    What statistics? EDIT: Right, those statistics. Yeah. Not very often. Kind of never, actually.

    May 11, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Of Sanity And Sliverware

    Hey, I'm Evi. ^_^ Love the title here-- that's what made me click it. Just outside the Common's [Commons'] dining room window, a soupy thick fog danced. Since Common is ...

    May 10, 2010
  • Information Desk Archive Re: Introducing Anthologies

    Everything worked fine for me! And this really is quite cool. :D Now I just need to find a whole bunch of stories to put my anthology.

    May 9, 2010
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: The Imperial City

    Hola! "Do you think this will ever turn into a real crown?" she asked. "A silver circlet with studded diamonds. Or maybe"-Dinah's eyes were distant now-"Maybe a gold one with ...

    May 9, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Manger

    Dems. You're crazy to think that this sucks and mine is "so much better". xD I don't have time (or material to complain about, actually) for a full critique, but ...

    May 9, 2010
  • Science-Fiction Short Stories Re: Leave Your Shoes (2)

    I realize how long this is, and I apologize profusely, but YWS won't let me post it in another section because of the 48 hour rule and the deadline is ...

    May 8, 2010


A beautiful funeral doesn't guarantee Heaven.
— Haitian Proverb