Evi

For being fantastically Finnish and having an avatar with Simba's priceless expression of confusion. ;)

Happy birthday! Have a great one, Nate!

First of all, Welcome to YWS. ;) I do hope you'll decide to stay. Young Writers Society's atmosphere is very much one of a community, and I definitely don't see ...

Actually, it is still a poem! ;) Funny how that happens. This won't be long-- I just wanted to stop by to give you some general pointers and opinions. I ...

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Psh. You're supposed to PM me when you post. :P Firstly, I'd just title it "The Ribbon Thief". Naivete, shame, love...meh. I have this deep-rooted vendetta against listing in poetry, ...

Hey, BMagic. ;) First of all, airbear gave you a good line-by-line critique; I agree with all of her points, so follow her advice. I'll mainly focus on overall stuff. ...

The quickest and most effective way to get someone to look at something is to tell them not to look at it. Adding an attachment and having the thread posted ...

Guys, Santa Clause is a legal provision within a contract. Santa Claus is a man who lives at the North Pole. ;) 'Clause' doesn't necessarily have to refer to the ...

Hello, FreezGee. ;) I'm Evi. Let's take a look at this thing, shall we? In life, Lexa Hyacinth had been many things: tall, blond haired, brown eyed, slender, athletic, funny, ...

Hey Elinor, me again. I'm not reading the other critiques, so just consider repeated advice as extra reason to edit something. And I warn you beforehand: I'm no history expert, ...

Navita's guestbook doesn't seem to be working. I've tried to post in it before, but they never show up.

Hello, iWrite. Hope you're enjoying yourself! I noticed that you have three works posted but no reviews-- trust me, you'll get more reviews the more you review. Just pick out ...

Yeah, you might not be too worried about the paragraphs, but readers are. And in this state it's nearly impossible to read. So if you'd like critiques, you're going to ...

Hey iheartbooks! Evi here, as requested. ;) Please know that I am in no way discouraging you from writing, and I say everything to help you grow as an author. ...