Evi

Hi cookEmonster! Have we met? If not, hi, I'm Evi. :D So, the first thing I'm going to tell you will be hard to hear: axe the first two paragraphs. ...

Wordless, yo.

Hey Femme! I've Evi. ^_^ I haven't read the previous chapters, so this'll be focusing more on writing style and small-scale things. “Francesca! I’ve missed you,” I sighed into her ...

*wipes a tear* Oh, CBF. They grow up so fast...

Hey germsie! ^_^ I'm Evi. Welcome to YWS! So, this story suffers from telling. What's bad about telling, you may ask? In fiction, 98% of the time, you want to ...

Hey Skittles! I feel like I've reviewed your work before, yes? She frowned in discontent Frowning people are generally discontent, so I think it's safe to say this is redundant. ...

Huh. This looks kind of intriguing. Thanks!

Mission Our mission is to create a high-quality literary magazine written, edited, and published by high school students. We strive to build respectful, mutually beneficial, writer-editor relationship

CICADA, for readers ages 14 and up, publishes original fiction, poetry, and first-person nonfiction by both adult and teen writers. Please keep in mind that CICADA's readers are intelligent and ...

Wow, it's beautiful!

The editors of The Claremont Review are looking to publish first class poetry, short stories and short plays by young adult writers (aged 13-19) anywhere in the English speaking world. ...

At first I clicked on this because of the title without even realizing it was yours, because I just took a 180-question exam concentrating largely on conservation of mass and ...

I love this discussion! It really depends for me. If my story is more about emotions/relationships, or character-driven, I find myself writing in past tense. It feels more natural. But ...

Hey Spook! Pick a title, any title! Really, almost anything is better than Untitled. Call it World on Fire, as in your synopsis, or Heaven-Blessed, or Heaven-Sent. Anything! I have ...

It's on Duotrope's, so it seems legit to me! Congrats on the publication. :D