Evi

Hey Nenc! Evi here. Not much here to critique, and since I haven't read anything up to this point, I'm just going to focus of stylistic suggestions. :arrow: This other ...

Ah, congrats Hope!

I'm going to lock this, since you've deleted the content. If you ever want to put the chapter back up here (which would be completely okay!) just PM me and ...

Known for having about a thousand different nicknames. (Bolt, Boltage, Boltastic, Sir Boltalot...)

Well, Kitty and theboss, there's also that long gray box in the bottom right-hand corner of the home page that's devoted to "Recent Posts", although it only encompasses the Literary ...

Hello papersoltice, pleasure to make your acquaintance. ;) Before I talk about the story itself, I suggest you format this story as "story", an option you can find at the ...

Hey, RedRaven! I'm Evi. So, the point of a first chapter is to hook readers in and make them want to read more. Right now, this isn't much of a ...

I switched to Chrome! I'm sure you're all very proud of me. And I do quite like it, especially over IE. Awesome stats, though.

Hey Arya, good to have you back! Three novels is quite the accomplishment. ;) Also, Georgia? Awesome! I'm from Arkansas; we southern belles have to stick together! PM me if ...

Hey Ben, sorry for the delay. Cool cover art! Power walking generally got the better of me, and tonight was cold too , only adding to my discomfort . You ...

Hello again! It silent for the next few seconds. It's, perhaps? So, I agree with Kara here on basically every point she made. And I know you can handle a ...

Hey Elinor. Here for the edited version! This won't be long; I need to get on over the Chapter 2. ;) I feel my heart pounding rapidly. Hmm. For me, ...

For having an insanely high average number of critiques per day (1.61?!) and being a part of NNWPS. (Mwaha.)

FABULOUS. I was so hoping you'd post something soon. I'm typing outside by the pool and my internet barely reaches this deck chair, so if the site eats up this ...

Hey Mochi! Sorry it took so long for you to get a second review. I agree with Kyllorac in that the idea behind this is unique and interesting, but the ...