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Re: Announcing Notifications + Other Small Changes
I'm actually saving that space for The Caligrafeed (aka The Feed) Yes. :D Yes yes yes. But it looks awesome, Nate!
Jun 15, 2010 -
Re: deleted
Me again! Let's hope I can be more helpful with this segment. Zeda’s green eyes peeked at me sceptically from behind her teased mousy brown hair as we exited the ...
Jun 14, 2010 -
Re: Deleted
Hey Jackle, Evi here. This was good. =O Your writing style is easy and accessible, with good sentence structure and length variation. Your characters seem natural and the dialogue believable. ...
Jun 14, 2010 -
Re: How do you add a friend??
Also, now with the profile updates, if you go to a person's profile there is a "Follow [username]" link under their avatar that you can click, and it adds them ...
Jun 14, 2010 -
Re: Report A Site Bug
Got this lovely message in coding above the header while trying to reach My Groups. [phpBB Debug] PHP Notice: in file /my_groups.php on line 63: Undefined variable: mygroupforums [phpBB Debug] ...
Jun 14, 2010 -
Re: User Profiles Have Just Been Updated
Got a bug! If you go to a user's profile under the Gifts tab and click on the link for "Give this user a gift", the user's name isn't automatically ...
Jun 14, 2010 -
Re: alone.
Hey Dalliance! It's all i can think "I" is always capitalized. Occasionally authors will try experimental stories or poem with no punctuation whatsoever, but obviously you weren't aiming for this, ...
Jun 13, 2010 -
Re: 13. Lion and Girl
Mandorelute! I've seen your poetry floating around, but I don't think I've taken a look at it yet. This review will be brief and minimally helpful. I'm not sure if ...
Jun 12, 2010 -
Re: The Hawk
Hello blackbird! So sorry that this has been left with only one review for so long. The acrid smell of smog permeates, an unwelcome invader from Los Angeles, his destination. ...
Jun 12, 2010 -
Re: The Boiler Chapter 1
Hey Nicko. Evi here. Hope you're finding everything well around YWS! Geraldine Hancock ran hastily . Her bare feet slapped the wet pavement while her breathe ripped out ice cold ...
Jun 11, 2010 -
Re: Noises - 01
Moved to Fantasy Novels, then. ;) For future reference, please post all continuing pieces in the genre-appropriate novel sub-forum.
Jun 11, 2010 -
Re: JackpotJohnson's New Website
That quote on the site's header (Be your self, because everyone else is taken! -JackpotJohnson-) was originally said in a different variation by Oscar Wilde: "Be yourself, everyone else is ...
Jun 10, 2010 -
Re: User Profiles Have Just Been Updated
AWESOME. I approve. It's fantastic.
Jun 10, 2010 -
Re: Pieces of a Life
This is pretty fantastic. Navita gave you a full crit, so I'm just going to stop by with fragmented comments. “You may have noticed by now,” I said, “that I ...
Jun 9, 2010 -
Re: Report A Site Bug
I was trying to send [user]Caligula's Launderette[/user] a gift for her birthday, but after I filled out the message box and clicked "submit" this message came up: Sorry, but no ...
Jun 8, 2010
