Evi

Seven so far! Granted, it isn't much compared to you crazy-productive reviewers, but I'm happy with it because they all make sense and have hopefully retained their helpfulness despite the ...

Hey Heffa! I haven't read the previous eleven chapters, but I'll still give you my opinions on this. Before anything else, change the formatting to the "Story" option, under the ...

Hello again, Dis! I regrettably haven't had the chance to read chapter four, but hopefully I can still be of help. I can't help but wonder, though, why you've posted ...

So, I tried to respond to a wall post of Suzanne's ( the link ) and after clicking "Submit reply" nothing would appear, including the "comment successfully submitted" message. I ...

Hello Redford! You say that you want to continue writing this, so I'm not sure whether it's supposed to be a self-contained short story or a snippet of a larger ...

Hello fell! Evi here. You obviously have a lot of emotion in this piece, and I see what you might've been going for with the repetition and parallel descriptions. There's ...

Hello ShauniRain! I'm Evi. Hope you're enjoying your time on YWS thus far. This critique is dedicated to Suzanne , who is unable to review you, although I'm sure she's ...

Okay, hello, Smashles! So, before anything else, change the "Special Formatting" option under the text-box to "Story" to fix the paragraph-bunching. It'll make everything much more approachable. Next,

Hello peanut! Terribly sorry for the delay. Interesting that you've managed to make a real story out of such random prompts, but you should know, since you requested a review ...

Awesome! I'm due for a reviewing spree.

A realistic superhero story. Ten years later with no technological advancements isn't enough for sci-fi, but really, you should be less worried about the genre and more about actually writing/finishin

Hello Radiate! Here as requested. I'm glad you altered this to be more straightforward poetry than prose poetry, because honestly I have very little idea how to critique the latter ...

Due to the fact that I am a goddess of productivity and punctuality, I have made it here before you sacrificed this work to the high heavens! I consider myself ...

Moved to dramatic poetry, since this doesn't seem like a short story. ;)

There isn't a concrete number, really. The average length seems to be anywhere from 500 to 3,000 words. Novels will be posted in smaller segments (either chapter by chapter, or ...