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Re: Back-to-School
Snoink, 2700 is the size of a small town over here, thus making it a massive school. :P And you guys are all so supportive! Thanks for the encouragement and ...
Aug 15, 2010 -
Re: Back-to-School
Nate's already covered the Summer Vacations thread, so I'll bring up the topic everyone's trying to forget about: school. For many of us (at least, in the Northern Hemisphere) school ...
Aug 14, 2010 -
Re: The knife
Hey Tigs! :) Unfortunately I didn't enjoy this as much as everyone else. It was kind of emo and redundant. 1/3 of the lines were just repeating what the other ...
Aug 11, 2010 -
Re: The last day
Hmm. Until I got to the twist, I was prepared to give you the generic spiel about why suicide stories and grieving friends are clichéd and unoriginal. And, while the ...
Aug 10, 2010 -
Re: The Age of Discovery
Okay, so, what now? ;) I think you mean this either as a prologue to a longer project (in which case you could move it to the Historical Fiction Novels ...
Aug 9, 2010 -
Re: Under the skin.
Hey PianoPlayer! I'm basically reviewing this because I've been playing the piano for nine years and automatically appreciate other pianists. :) Doesn't mean I'll go soft on you for the ...
Aug 9, 2010 -
Re: Ask a question here (or start a new topic!)
Hey Kakagirl, I'm Evi. :) Nowadays we're on a "Follower" system instead of "Friending" one, so if you'd like to "follow" a member, just click on the "[Follow _____]" link ...
Aug 9, 2010 -
Re: Death of an Angel
Hey Vampyre! :) Very interesting story you've got here. I liked it. It's written well, and although I never really got a feel for characters or plot, it doesn't matter; ...
Aug 9, 2010 -
Re: Tenses
My opinion? That's okay, but only if it means something. Don't just decide, "Hey, this chapter I'm going to switch tenses!" Readers will notice and spend the rest of the ...
Aug 8, 2010 -
Re: Just Know That I Love You {Edited}
Hey Eli! Here as requested. According to it , he had suffered a gruesome death—when a navy soldier called Harris had found him, his chest and shoulders were soaked in ...
Aug 7, 2010 -
Re: Cutting the Feet From Under You
Hello again, Woozey! Here as I promised. Tina Pian smiled. She couldn’t help it. Everything was just so. Happy and perfect, the satisfaction temporarily easing her aching joints. Honestly, I'd ...
Aug 6, 2010 -
Re: Avirkian's Light pt. 2
Hey Hobbit! Here as promised. Dawn rose above the city of Avirkian , and with it climbed pillars of smoke and steam floating from chimneys and pipes protruding from the ...
Aug 5, 2010 -
Re: Staff Picks: Comedy Gold
I can never help but giggle at this:
Aug 5, 2010 -
Re: YWS Official News Competition: RESULTS!
Awesome contest, Bentacle. (New nickname? YES.) Congrats to all the awesome entries, and the winners!
Aug 4, 2010 -
Re: Avirkian's Light pt. 2
This was accidentally posted twice: to review, post here ! *locked*
Aug 4, 2010
