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Not that you care, but this gets me my second blue star, so hoorah! :P So, I don't know what most of this means! Which is actually a problem, since ...

You'll get out of YWS what you put into YWS. If you want reviews, then go review. We do have a tool for keeping up with a project-- "follow" that ...

First of all, I'm going to move your four chapters from the Short Story section to the Novel section. Once I've done that, watch this tutorial by Nate on the ...

Hey Timmy! Evi here. Drowning in an ocean of pain I like your first stanza's ideas, save for this. This is angsty and clichéd, so find a more original way ...

Hello Skins! I must warn you, ahead of time, that I know that a personal bias will prevent me from loving this piece even before I've read it. Something about ...

*cough* Not always four years. :P

It never went anywhere, lol. We signed up and got a storyline, but then things sort of fizzled out. But that's okay! The changes are all looking good, Nate.

Hey borntoshop. Sarg already gave you a good, thorough review, fixing many of the numerous grammatical and spelling errors here, so do listen to his advice! All of the things ...

ENFJ. Popular and sensitive, with outstanding people skills. Externally focused, with real concern for how others think and feel. Usually dislike being alone. They see everything from the human angle,

Hey Jem! While you obviously have a lot of emotion and powerful prose brewing under these heaping blocks of text, they're hard to access when you're telling us the story ...

Hey sargsauce. I liked this. I'm not sure if I could dislike anything you write, honestly. I feel like I need to go out and buy a foam finger with ...

Hey KitxKat. I haven't read the rest of this, but I'll just comment on the writing in this section. “See you in ten.” Courtney says and I hit the off ...

Hey Warrior! Short review today. ;) One issue I find here is that your narrator's motions get very murky. She/he is flying, suspended, descending, glancing above...all while things float by. ...

Hey Hibiscus. I apologize for this going along for so long with only one review! One line-specific point: There’s beloved vestiges Vestiges = plural. Therefore, this needs to be " ...

Hey again, Tigs. :D Please don't take offense at anything I've said! I'm simply here to give you my honest opinions, in the hope that they can help your edits ...