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I think it's good that we're removing the excess things here. I wish News could've worked, but Sudoku and Interactive Stories weren't very writing-related anyway. Though, I hate to see ...

Hello Horseradish! :D “John?” he whispered sadly, as if moaning only to the mellowed wind. He didn't raise his eyes from the culled dirt beneath his bare feet, too afraid ...

Go ahead and PM a Mod about it-- if it's a literary work and at least one copy doesn't have any reviews yet, that one can be deleted. ;) I ...

Aww, I didn't enjoy this like I enjoyed the story. One problem is that this can't stand alone, like the story-- I understand it because I've read the story, but ...

This was awesome! Loved the nurse's voice; it was very clear and personal, even through it was in third person. Cool metaphor of a metal coffin for the ship, also. ...

Oops! Forgive the delay. ;) Here as requested. Quick typo: It had to be at close to a ninety degree angle, if not that. So, er, I'm a bit biased ...

Hello Ryanke! Good to see an entry for the September contest so soon! :D I liked this-- it had a wry, dry tone to it and an appealing simplicity that ...

Whoa, Anna! You have quite the username, don't you? ;) Regret sniggering by her side. "Sniggering" means "laughing quietly", which I don't think is what you mean here. A girl ...

Whoa. Wonder what it is about mint chocolate chip and writers? My friends all think I'm crazy for that being my favorite.

I link to articles in reviews all the time, especially about grammar. And I snoop around there quite a bit when I'm looking for help with a specific area-- perspective, ...

Dude, The Beatles are incomparable.

Whew! I was worried at the end there, when the spear was inches away from your heart, and then that point towards the middle when you nearly slipped in that ...

Naviiiii. So, I know I already gave you some thoughts on Wearing Red, which was my favorite. I liked the whirlwind repetition and how subtly (yet effectively) you transitioned the ...

Who rocks? That's right, YWSers do.

How convenient! Now I know exactly who to befriend for my quest towards world domination.