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  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Mystery in Mayfield [1/3]

    So you do write! :D I thought this was cute. It's well-written. The dialogue is realistic. But it's also kind of boring and, at times, a lot of the conversations ...

    Nov 4, 2010
  • Lounge, The Re: Featured Member November 2010

    Go to the Ed to the exclamation mark!

    Nov 4, 2010
  • Other Re: The Lockets Book Trailer *NEW with screenshots*

    Since this isn't an actual chapter in your novel, I'm moving it to Other. :D

    Nov 2, 2010
  • Lounge, The Re: Review Day October 2010 Check-In

    I've done one, and hopefully I can do another in between my show at three, the two speeches I need to write by Monday, and the growing pile of homework ...

    Oct 30, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Mr. McFinnigan

    Hey Zekkie! This will be short. You have some nice description in that first paragraph, especially of Mr. McFinnigan, but I'd cut that paragraph in half once you start talking ...

    Oct 30, 2010
  • Lounge, The Re: YWS in Writer's Digest

    =O How fabulous! It's true, though. We're (part of) the future of the literary world, which is both exciting and terrifying.

    Oct 28, 2010
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: SPEW

    Won't get me SPEW! :smt003 Maybe we already have... *cackle*

    Oct 27, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Laundry Basket

    Hey jDawn! I thought this was pretty dry. The contest is about description of the inanimate object, but I don't feel like the basket was described; there is no clear ...

    Oct 17, 2010
  • Lounge, The Re: Pokemon Re-Imagined by an artist

    Eevee needs sleep. xD

    Oct 10, 2010
  • Lounge, The Re: What comes to you first? Images or words?

    I suppose the conclusion so far is...writers are all freaking nuts! So very true. And I always see images! But I definitely don't think that means I shouldn't be writing. ...

    Oct 4, 2010
  • Lounge, The Re: Is the hardcover novel dead?

    I will go on reading hardcovers until it becomes massively inconvenient. And then, if I decide the practicality outweighs the negatives, I will happily buy an ebook and convert to ...

    Oct 4, 2010
  • Lounge, The Re: Featured Member October 2010: Sporkpunk

    It's funny, because she joined right as the Sporks-vs-Spoons debate was in its peak, and I was convinced she was just someone creating a new account as a joke. xD ...

    Oct 3, 2010
  • Lounge, The Re: The Glist

    So, I like Glee, but this is far too complicated and really not necessary. xD

    Oct 3, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The Fire

    Hey! Cool poem idea here. I’m writing a story where the underlying theme is all about fire and its combination of being beautiful and deadly, so it was interesting to ...

    Sep 26, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Eye of the Storm (Pantaloons meets Navi whilst liking Siken)

    Hey, Helpful and Navi! It’s great to see a collaboration of two of the site’s strongest poets. ;) And I love the idea of the formatting making the poem itself ...

    Sep 26, 2010


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