Evi

Yay, popularity! I will definitely take these last requests. But any new ones might want to hold on for a while-- getting a little busy. ;)

Whoa. Kagi is kakagirl? Daisuki is Echoes? Mia and Shubhi/Shrub? This is why I hate name changes. O_o I figured all those people had just left!

Satanic Peacocks Enlightening Writers

Sorry for the delay! I wasn't able to set aside time until Review day conveniently rolled around. :) Vast was short, even by my standards. Whoa! Where'd the "my" come ...

Might as well review this one too, eh? ;) First line: how does an inanimate object creak painfully ? Maybe it sounds painful to the human ears of your character, ...

Is there a way to buy multiple e-book copies on one Amazon account that you're aware of? >_> I have this Amazon giftcard (from the YWS Olympics, ironically enough) but ...

Bought a copy for Kindle PC! It's amazing, really-- great job to everyone who was involved. There's nothing cooler than seeing your work in such a professional setting. :D

Hey Mustard! Really nice sentiment going on here. I'll point out some small things-- The repeated "were you" threw me off, especially with only a comma between, and the two ...

Oh boy. Chapter 20. You've got some dedication! That's fabulous-- no amount of critiques can help you if you can't force yourself to just push on, so you're already on ...

Hey Twit! Thanks for the request. :) I did read the first section, but my only comment, really, is to cut back on your use of names within dialogue. Observe ...

Welcome to YWS! ^_^ Evi here. Haven't read Scarless, so sorry for any confusion! But it wouldn’t be able to reach her anyway , the barrier above her kept the ...

HANNAH. You're crazy. xD I've gotten at least twenty stars from her already!

It's been a while, eh? I'm rusty at my poetry crits...but I think I say that every time. Firstly, I'm not sure how to approach slam poetry differently from your ...

I'm really determined to make it onto that leader-board. I need to get rid of all of these points anyhow. BRING IT.

So yeah. This has been dead for eons, but I'm trying to review again, so come at me, people! Taking any prose or poetry requests.