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Thanks to everybody who had a look at this. I don't really need an in-depth critique, just maybe some feedback on rhythym and rhyming. If anyone has punctuation advice, I'd ...

Wow! This was really good! I'm surprised nobody has comented on this yet. So, as a whole, I really enjoyed this. When I'm writing an action scene, a lot of ...

What in tarnation?! :shock: I think you're either terribly confused, or lacking imagination at the moment. If it's the former, then I suspect you either meant to post a lot ...

Hmm. Not being sure quite how to review something like this, I'll just give you some quick feedback. I thought it was well-written; you come across as somebody who has ...

Oh Google, oh Google, none could hope to compare. You're simply fantastic! Your smarts must be shared. I'm awed by your wisdom, you have instant results 'bout the latest celebrities ...

Ha. Brilliant. The whole time, I kept thinking, "OMG, this is going to be so deep, it's about rape and I'm feeling my heart being wrenched out for this poor ...

Hey Wiseman! Thought that Narrative Poetry is an underappreciated forum and decided to review yours. I like it a lot, expecially how it sorta rhymes very subtlely. At the beginning, ...

I don't know where this goes: Lryric or Dramatic? So, 'Other' is it. My first posted piece! EDIT: Thank you to everyone who reviewed! I'm going to keep editing. I ...

I always thought it was a flashlight. Like, for reading under your covers at night when your parents think you're sleeping. I have that down to an art. But I ...

Nate--I didn't really mean that God would exempt other things from making sense, I meant that God himself, assuming that He does exist, seems like he could be allowed to ...

Hmmm. The darkness came, passed and went away stealing not second of my light today. Stealing not a second? Or stealing not second s ? Anyway, so far I'm understanding ...

My mother was born in the Philippines and migrated here when she was about my age. When I visit my grandparents, aunts, uncles, and everybody else from her side of ...

Like I said, the whole offending people doesn't have anything to do with my beliefs. I really don't know much on the subject, since, being taught at a Catholic school, ...

Everything you say is true, Galatea. And I do think there is a choice; I don't mean to eliminate it. I'm just saying that, they way I was raised, the ...

I wrote a story for my school's Young Author Competition and won first place. Everybody told me it was the best book they'd read in their entire life and that ...