Evi

So many lives among us, Living in love, hate, and complexity. Not to say that life is black and white, But when you look, can you see more? This is ...

*sighs* Ah, Sarah. You're infamous for terribly marvelous critiques, you know that? I'm almost afriad to ask for a review from the Castle. :D Almost. So, if you have the ...

Hmph. You've got a lot of learning to do, missy. First of all-- have a good, long look at our rules here. We've got Greeters (those friendly people whose names ...

Okey Dokey, I'm Evi and I shall be your reviewer. First of all, I liked this. Really, I did. But this is going to sound harsh anyway. I looked around ...

Sorry, wiseman. I'm getting vibes of elves and dragons and fairies that all go on some journey to battle the evil sorceror and save their kingdom. Maybe a lost princess ...

Muchos gracias. I think the dilemma has been solved thanks to your profound wisdom and helpfulness. :) Thanks.

(Brace yourselves, people. This is the first time my writing has seen the light of day. Go nuts.) EDIT: (Thank you everyone for your compliments and critiques!) He was suffocating ...

:( When copying and pasting a story from Microsoft Word onto YWS, I can't get my tabs to transfer as well. I think they're called tabs, at least. Those spaces ...

"Huh. I died from Felicity's illness. So, I'd tell Jill that she'd better make sure she's on Felicity's will before it's too late." ~ Genevieve "That's horrible! You're a terrible ...

Thief

Rubric-- I find it interesting that, after stating that you're a believer in evolution and aren't convinced there's an afterlife, that you still sign your name "Cheers and god bless." ...

Umm...about a girl named Sarah Jackson who is mysterious? Maybe she died under mysterious circumstances, or disappeared mysteriously? Or left a mysterious note! I might pick it up, depending on ...

:D As a poem, I would have to tear it apart, piece by piece, and break your heart. But... As lyrics, I would not. I would think it was very ...

This is, as is everything in the Art section here on YWS, a thousand times better than anything I draw. Ever. I'm artistically challenged, you know. It's so bad, it's ...

Hey, Clueless! That's weird to say. Anyway, I thought this was nice. It's slightly cliched; broken and despaired turns into renewing happiness and hope. Either way, this was nice. It ...