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Re: A or An?
Wow. I actually know this one. To have the 'an' be grammatically correct, the word has to not only begin with a vowel, but begin with the sound of a ...
Jan 24, 2009 -
Re: Vanilla Fillip
Perfect lines of oak trees smile on me today, their leaves dappling my dark brown skin in freckles of gold. Central park has never been so beautiful. The first sentence ...
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Re: Watermelon Rinds
Thanks a lot, MV. I'll try to cram that description in somewhere. Picture Prompt Nice involved a smiling girl lying on the grass with a fistful of limp flowers. The ...
Jan 24, 2009 -
Re: Beauty
Hola, my name is Evi and I shall be your reviewer today. :D If you add an 'L' to my name you get 'Evil'. There's a reason for that. Waiting ...
Jan 24, 2009 -
Re: What does this username make you think of?
A giant grim reaper with a cross hanging from his hooded neck. Tower Knight
Jan 24, 2009 -
Re: Pre-Algebra
Eureka! You both rock epically. I'm humbled by your genius. And, sorry, I though there were two variables. But I was tired, and my brain wasn't working properly. I think ...
Jan 23, 2009 -
Re: Pre-Algebra
So, yeah. Math has never been my strong point, and my parents are about as skilled as I am. I tremble at the sight of these problems. They're a piece ...
Jan 23, 2009 -
Re: Watermelon Rinds
Enjoy! Feedback appreciated, if you are so inclined. EDIT: Oh, I forgot. Picture Prompt Nine. Thank you everybody for your reviews and your stars! They all made my day. :D ...
Jan 23, 2009 -
Re: Rosey's reviews
Hi, Rosey. So, this is the first story that I've posted. I've gotton a few wonderful reviews, but I'd like a bit more feedback. I'm not sure whether to continue ...
Jan 21, 2009 -
Re: A Memory So Vivid
Maginifico! First of all, I fail horribly at the technical aspects of poetry. As in, punctuation, capitalization, and line breaks and all that boring stuff. However! I hope I can ...
Jan 20, 2009 -
Re: Crespuscola e Morte Chapter 1
Huh. My first review, the bolds got messed up. Oops. Newbie mistake, I suppose. But I love the changes you made, especially with the ending! It's great. Hope I wasn't ...
Jan 20, 2009 -
Re: Crespuscola e Morte Chapter 1
You critiqued my story; I am here to return the favor. Ah, the nitpicks. On an evening as dark as soot and as chilled as death, two men were walking ...
Jan 19, 2009 -
Re: For Tomorrow
Break through all barriers, Cut through [s]those[/s] the chains; 'those' makes it sound like a work-out commercial. You know? Like..."Lift those legs, ladies! Do those squats! :D Stand between anger, ...
Jan 19, 2009 -
Re: Nate with an Ape
Since I'm only twelve, I had to actually mail Nate a permission slip signed by my mom that gave me permission to be on here. Just because I'm four months ...
Jan 19, 2009 -
Re: Our World
Hmm. Yeah, this is really short. And, at the beginning with the texting, I thought you had just suddenly decided to abandon proper spelling, capitalization, and grammar. Until I realized ...
Jan 18, 2009
