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  • Writing Tips Re: A or An?

    Wow. I actually know this one. To have the 'an' be grammatically correct, the word has to not only begin with a vowel, but begin with the sound of a ...

    Jan 24, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Vanilla Fillip

    Perfect lines of oak trees smile on me today, their leaves dappling my dark brown skin in freckles of gold. Central park has never been so beautiful. The first sentence ...

    Jan 24, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Watermelon Rinds

    Thanks a lot, MV. I'll try to cram that description in somewhere. Picture Prompt Nice involved a smiling girl lying on the grass with a fistful of limp flowers. The ...

    Jan 24, 2009
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Beauty

    Hola, my name is Evi and I shall be your reviewer today. :D If you add an 'L' to my name you get 'Evil'. There's a reason for that. Waiting ...

    Jan 24, 2009
  • Randomosity Archive Re: What does this username make you think of?

    A giant grim reaper with a cross hanging from his hooded neck. Tower Knight

    Jan 24, 2009
  • Homework Help Re: Pre-Algebra

    Eureka! You both rock epically. I'm humbled by your genius. And, sorry, I though there were two variables. But I was tired, and my brain wasn't working properly. I think ...

    Jan 23, 2009
  • Homework Help Re: Pre-Algebra

    So, yeah. Math has never been my strong point, and my parents are about as skilled as I am. I tremble at the sight of these problems. They're a piece ...

    Jan 23, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Watermelon Rinds

    Enjoy! Feedback appreciated, if you are so inclined. EDIT: Oh, I forgot. Picture Prompt Nine. Thank you everybody for your reviews and your stars! They all made my day. :D ...

    Jan 23, 2009
  • WRFF Archive Re: Rosey's reviews

    Hi, Rosey. So, this is the first story that I've posted. I've gotton a few wonderful reviews, but I'd like a bit more feedback. I'm not sure whether to continue ...

    Jan 21, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: A Memory So Vivid

    Maginifico! First of all, I fail horribly at the technical aspects of poetry. As in, punctuation, capitalization, and line breaks and all that boring stuff. However! I hope I can ...

    Jan 20, 2009
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Crespuscola e Morte Chapter 1

    Huh. My first review, the bolds got messed up. Oops. Newbie mistake, I suppose. But I love the changes you made, especially with the ending! It's great. Hope I wasn't ...

    Jan 20, 2009
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Crespuscola e Morte Chapter 1

    You critiqued my story; I am here to return the favor. Ah, the nitpicks. On an evening as dark as soot and as chilled as death, two men were walking ...

    Jan 19, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: For Tomorrow

    Break through all barriers, Cut through [s]those[/s] the chains; 'those' makes it sound like a work-out commercial. You know? Like..."Lift those legs, ladies! Do those squats! :D Stand between anger, ...

    Jan 19, 2009
  • Randomosity Re: Nate with an Ape

    Since I'm only twelve, I had to actually mail Nate a permission slip signed by my mom that gave me permission to be on here. Just because I'm four months ...

    Jan 19, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Our World

    Hmm. Yeah, this is really short. And, at the beginning with the texting, I thought you had just suddenly decided to abandon proper spelling, capitalization, and grammar. Until I realized ...

    Jan 18, 2009


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