Evi

So, animals. I think it would be interesting to take the perspective of a bird slamming into a window, maybe. We think it's so funny, just to hear the *thump* ...

Banned for stealing my cookie, and shoving it in my face by devouring it in your avatar.

Alright! It's Evi again. So, this has absolutely sothing to do with the last installment, not to mention nothing to do with caterpillars, pulverized or otherwise. I'm going to have ...

First of all: Hi Hannah, I'm Evi, and I shall be your reviewer today. I've seen you around before, and thought I'd like to see your writing. Secondly: EEK! Holy ...

I was eleven when World War II changed my life. Blunt much? Try not to start off with something so solid. My father had already gone to fight and my ...

The trees were always there, A silent warning not to pass. It was a rule I kept to: Don’t pass, The repitition of 'pass' bothers me. Synonyms, perhaps? And there ...

Furry, a snout, greyish fur, and...let's see...eyes that look like sand! Totally joking. I'm envisioning milky complexion, hazel eyes, and medium-dark brown hair that's cut right above your shoulders.

Huh. I must be weird. I saw 'Ciana' and thouht, "Chee-ah-nah". But that's just me. :) Yeah, I'd suggest changing it so it's not so confusing.

You know your a writer when you freak out upon finding grammatical errors in published works. Harry Potter has, like, a bajillion. I was appalled! :)

It’s cold here (comma here) but I quite like this frozen prison, hidden and concealed under the blanket of snow. I’d ask (Ask the neighbors what? There's no question.) my ...

*sobs uncontrollably for a few moments before getting herself together enough to make a halfway-decent review* This. Was. So. Sad. And, I kind of hate you at the moment just ...

Ancient statues standing tall, noble visage, broken all, they've stood for near a thousand years, they'll probably stand for a thousand more. one too many syllables They watch us live, ...

So long ago, so long ago that no fleshy mind remembers it, and yet so strong is his legacy that even now the mere whisper of his name makes those ...

Hey. Thanks for the review you did on 'Dusting Off Angels'. It was very encouraging. I was wondering if you'd like to take a look at something else I've written; ...

I'm not sure, guys. She was banned for plaigarism. The mods aren't going to take that lightly, and I don't think she's going to be let back on. Not under ...