Evi

Hey, how ya doing? I noticed that you didn't have any comments. But, seriosuly, you've got to give people more than one hour to comment on your stuff. Try, like, ...

Emily This isn't what I want to be. This isn't how I want people to see myself. (How I want people to see me .) So many negative thoughts are ...

This world of darkness, this world of hate. This isn't a sentence. No period for fragments. This world of cruelty, this world of fate. Ditto. The rhyming here sounds slightly ...

Close your eyes and brace yourself: I like the comcept of bracing yourself, instead of bracing 'it', as is much more common. Our established way of life deteriorates. Young girls ...

You know you're a writer when, once your eye catches this thread, you're overwhelmed with flashbacks of writer-ly things you've done over the years. Such as google the longest word ...

Hey, I'm Evi. I'm surprised nobody else has gotten to this; you're pretty famous on YWS! Th e sun is so bright that it hurts to look at the white ...

I really liked this. In fact, so much that I'm going to give it a gold star. It has that nice surprise ending; without it, the poem would be pointless. ...

I've been tattled! anti-pop: to return the favor, and because you are a great writer and a fun person Rosey: because you write everything in pink, and recommended me for ...

Time Time is a river, Constantly on the move. Turning and gushing, Surging and rushing. I like how only the last two lines rhyme. Let's see if you can keep ...

Holy guacamole, anti-pop! Why didn't you tell me you were hilarious? :) This is truly, honestly brilliant. I love the transition between happy self and non-happy self. I could point ...

Oh, goody! I'm here to finish what I started! I loved him. But I also loved spaghetti. Dude. I died when I read this. Positively died. This. Is. So. Hilarious. ...

And, to dive straight in! “Charlotte,” called the voice. I knew that voice. His voice. (Put 'his' in italics, maybe?) At first, it was like any other voice. It's really ...

Bonjour. Again. We're becoming quite well acquainted with each other by now, don't you agree? :D So, this one is rather short. It shouldn't take me very long at all! ...

Hey again, Hannah! I have come faithfully to finish what I started. First of all, I'd like to clarify something: I like this 'patchwork' series. After re-reading my critiques, I ...

Hey, Explosive! I'm Evi, and I shall be your reviewer today. In fact! You have reviewed two of my pieces, so I'm just returning the favor! Run, rabbit, run, You ...