Evi

*Bump* Hopefully, bumping is allowed in this forum. If it's not, please forgive me. I just didn't want to start a whole new thread. The new problems I need help ...

Yes, but I'm highly aware of how many brain cells I'm losing with every sniff. TPBM speaks more than one language.

6/10...because you accused me, perfect me, of being a stalker!

I'm on a sugar high, yes. TPBM has unfinished homework that they're putting off in order to post on YWS.

One more step and we'll be together. One more step and we'll hold hands. One more step and we'll love each other. A step I can't take 'cause you're too ...

Hey sparkle! Welcome to YWS! Just a few notes before I get to the crit: You need to maintain a ratio of 2:1 with reviews and stuff posted. Like, if ...

Hey sparkle! Welcome to YWS! Just a few notes before I get to the crit: You need to maintain a ratio of 2:1 with reviews and stuff posted. Like, if ...

My love, I dreamed the most beautiful of dreams. You were there too. Where your life ended was were the dream began, in the middle of the “big blue”. I ...

Oh my gosh. These are hilarious. I love the one with the keyboard.

Uh, sorry if this sounds harsh, but this site is in fact for writers to edit each other. Support also, but that's why we have the whole 'critique' system going. ...

Why do you look out from a tainted window? Great, strong starting sentence. It makes me immeditaely wonder. Why do you wear shoes Crushing the dewy green grass (Dewy sounds ...

Mr. Papoulis: Invite them over for tea and crumpets. What was your first coherant sentence when you were first learning to talk?

Hey pop! So, for some weird reason, all of the things of yours that I review aren't really reviews. They're more like me just saying that you rock epically. I ...

First of all, I looked at your reply to Rosey's critique. You really don't need to keep reminding everyone that it's not necessary to stick to rules and standards. We ...

Lavender eyes you paint the skies a shade of purple and blue. I want to find out if what we have is loving, pure, and true. This is sweet. The ...