Evi

Hey. I'm Evi. ^^ Welcome to my humble establishment. The cool part: I will review the following: Any Fiction (except for fanfiction, though, please!) Any Poetry All I need is ...

Uh...true? Does this mean 'the user above me' did? TPBM wears a watch every day.

Scripts is used mainly for plays, it seems, but I don't think there's any ban on using it for television. I'd go ahead and post it there! And. if you ...

Hey Sela, it's Evi again! Had to continue what I started, of course. I shall delve straight in! :arrow: I loved the formal tone of the first segement, but, alas, ...

Hey Sela! I saw this on the front page and thought it looked interesting! I'm a sucker for fairytale-spin offs. :D So, you don't really want nitpicks? :? I shall ...

Probably. I run one mile in seven and a half, so doubled that's fifteen, but I'd probably get a lot slower and finish at about 19:59. :D TPBM posts in ...

Teague, the light there hits your right profile perfectly; it looks like half of you is glowing! :D Everyone is gorgeous. I see a new wave of writers/supermodels arising! :wink:

Dude. That's totally why some genius out there started doing the whole 'TPBM' thing. It's way too much work for a lazy person like me! TPBM knows what an ocarina ...

Hey, deafwriter, Evi here! I saw that your poor chapter had no reviews, and wanted to fix that. So, hold on tight! :arrow: Alright. I hate having to say this, ...

Not sure if 'Lyric' is the right forum for this, but I'm sick of stuffing everything in 'Other'. Enjoy! :wink: EDIT: Thank you everyone for your fantastic reviews! Butterflies used ...

Evi here! I was immediately drawn in by the title; either you changed it since the last reviews, or everyone else is crazy. 'This town Doesn't Have Sidewalks'? Brilliant! I ...

So! This is rather beautiuful. You bring the entire poem together at the end, and your balance of short and long lines is actually not as irritating as I first ...

Actually, wrong! I went to London and Edinburgh (sp?) this past summer. Loved it. Seriously, if you're from the States it's a wonderful experience. TPBM has lost something that didn't ...

Alas, I actually do not have pink hair! Shoking, I know. :wink: I look so little in this picture, though. It makes me feel young. :D Nobody stalk me, please! ...

I agree with Rosey. The second seems to have better imagery and a more interesting wording.