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*Evi alert* Hey Knightly Angel! I'd call you Angel, but it seems we already have so many Angels on here. Plus, Knightly makes you sound that much more impressive! Okay, ...

*twists mustache evilly* I bet I could make you give me some popcorn in I wanted. Wanna bet? :twisted:

I'm surprised neither of the other reviewers commented on the irony! :P Here we have a tree, which supposedy cannot think, writing a quite thoughtful and deep poem about not ...

You get the key to the universe. -insert coin-

Recently I was reading a murder mystery, and one of the middle chapters revealed the murderer to anyone reading the book. However! All of the characters were still completely oblivious ...

Hey again, Sela! I'm glad you didn't ask for nit-picks, because I couldn't find any! *epic gasp* Shoking, I know, but it was obvious that you read this a good ...

I'm not going to do a review on the edit, but I will give you this: Commas -vs- Semi-colons A little tutorial done by yours truly. You should really check ...

Done. * sigh * Aunty Pop, your poem was just so lovely. And congrats, you're my prime customer! :lol:. No line. Not that there ever is, anyways.

Oh, love, this was so sweet! I just smiled as I read it. Just smiled. In truth, I'm just glad to find a well-written, emotion-filled poem that's happy . Our ...

Ta, Maki-Chan, 'tis finished. However, you might not want to post in nineteen different 'Review for Food' threads. Six or seven at the very most. Then reviews tend to lose ...

Dear, you posted in at least nineteen different 'Will Review for Food' threads. Although I'm not sure if there's a concrete rule for this, it slightly irritates me and I'm ...

Ta, I'm Evi and I am here to [s]shred[/s] critique your story! Hehe. Totally kidding. That morning started out as any other morning. I woke up in the cot my ...

One major problem I often see in the writing here at YWS is the use of commas and semi-colons. I find myself constantly giving example sentences critique after critique, but ...

Ha, Jared. You say 'back then' like it was another lifetime. And how can you be grumpy sitting at a piano? :D

Name: Watermelon Rinds Genre: Other Fiction It already has some really good reviews, but you bumped yourself and I can always use more feedback, ya? :wink: For Clo's Monster Mash ...