Evi

Hey Della! Evi here. I agree that a two-part prologue is a bit excessive, especially when they're this long. I'd just label this a prologue. I enjoyed this. :D One ...

Hey Story girl! :D Perseph already gave you a really in-depth critique, so I'm going to be brief. I found this poem hard to follow. You seem to have taken ...

I'm an awful person! I told you to send me an angry PM if I didn't get to this within a week. :P I swear, I'm completely useless without proper ...

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Read. Read fiction, read nonfiction, read newspapers, read post-it notes. Try to read books from different genres and by different authors. When you're sick of reading, write-- and don't worry ...

I see me. xD I'm pretty sure that giant dot right in my state is entirely me and my tendency to check YWS obsessively.

Firstly, congrats on winning the contest! If you liked Leviathan by Westerfeld, read his Uglies series-- Uglies, Pretties, then Specials. :D They're fabulous sci-fi with nice sub-plots of romance, and

Wow, um. Thank you all so much for you kind words and your likes, but this thing is over two years old, and it should really stop resurrecting by now. ...

I can't wait. I'm going to actually try to contribute this time. :D

Aww, Victoria! I'm also sorry you feel that way, but the fact is, this is a site for critiques. By posting your work you have sent out a request to ...

we will only publish material that is generally appropriate for ages 13+ 12+: Maybe the topic deals with something serious or contains a couple of low-key curse words . First ...

Hello Racheal! I told you I'd get here sooner or later (although it always seems to end up as later). Small things first. Ha. As if the rag-tag group of ...

Hello Rachael dearest! I know I've already sent you a PM with the link to part two of my short story, so I hope I'm not being a bother. I ...

He didn't misspell complement , actually. Hey Gal, here as promised. I'm a bit rusty with poetry, but we'll see what we can do! I like the first and last ...

Hey tintin! I'm Evi. So I wasn't particularly fond of this poem, and there are a couple of reasons for this. The first is that you try to rhyme the ...