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Re: The One
The One with the fire, The One with the ice, The One who knows nothing but throwing the dice. The One with the heart, The One with the knife, The ...
Sep 3, 2011 -
Re: Landscapes
Really cool, seriously, where did you take them?? I enjoy using pictures as inspiration for my writing so I might come back again... And again... And again! Love, EvensLily xxxxx
Sep 2, 2011 -
Re: Watching The Rain
This is deffo really GREAT!! I love this poem, the meaning behind it is super, enjoyed the style of writing and the rhyme scheme used! The title is the thing ...
Sep 2, 2011 -
Re: Fate
Heya, good story. One thing though, when you are writing you need to be a little more formal for example: 4 secs, should really be, four seconds. I also agree ...
Sep 2, 2011 -
Re: Towers Falling
Brilliant story!!! Really good, I was in Boston at the time of the twin towers falling. Scariest moment of my life when I heard that my friends father had jumped ...
Sep 2, 2011 -
Re: Chapter 1- New
Hey, Cool story, I like how the character is deep, has a harsh past, really interesting. Just a tad bit of advice, when you start to write and get into ...
Sep 2, 2011 -
Re: The Kiss
Really enjoyed it!! Love soppy love stories like this!! But I'm not sure the boys would have made up so quickly... I have guy friends and trust me they hold ...
Sep 2, 2011 -
Re: Window
Hey, it was a very interesting poem, the title really drew me in... Window, simple and very open. I didn't understand something's though... For example 'don't hurt me, I'm not ...
Sep 2, 2011 -
Re: Hidden (Preview)
I love sitting in the park, listening to the wind rustle through the tress. If you listen hard enough you can hear a faint whistling sound the tress cry as ...
Sep 1, 2011
