EvensLily

Heya, I think that you need to go back and re-read things, change Grammatical errors. This is the thing that really frustrates me about this story because it can be ...

Heya, Just out of interest where did the title come from? Its very good :) I was slightly confused when I started to read this, it started out as an ...

Heya, I like the chapter title Just another everyday vampire party - yeah, cuz that happens everyday! As a writer of Vampires and werewolves and all that Jazz, I am ...

Heya, As a person who also writes fantasy fiction (y'all know, Werewolves, Vampires... all that jazz!) When I saw you title I was immediately intrigued. I enjoyed your chapter and ...

Brilliant!- I haven't read the others... well there goes my afternoon! LOVE IT! X

Hello, Your writing... Amazing! Love the story. I HAVE to go back now and read the rest of it, your writing is unique and flows from pen to page and ...

Heya, I've read all your chapters by the way, I am so intrigued by the story line. I think though your writing can be improved slightly. I think you could ...

Chapter FIVE: Stubborn WOLVES LOCATION: The Park+ Home As the park came into view in front of me the safe happy feeling came over me but today it was joined ...

I love to title, Silence... A broken romance. Brilliant! The character and writing depth was brilliant, so much emotion in such a short space of text. Brilliant, loved it! Love, ...

Hey there, Living in Amsterdam, every time I hear Coffee shop, I immediately think of drugs! but when I saw it was romantic, I forced myself to click and found ...

I really enjoyed this, it was really funny. Personification with cheese and eggs, I thought it was brilliant. I didn't have a clue what you were going to be writing ...

Heya, I was slightly disappointed with this, sorry, but it was only speaking! Where's the description? Where's the feeling? to me it's just a whole batch of conversations! I'm sorry ...

I love this! I thought the writing was really mature... really well done! You managed to describe everything perfectly. I like the title "coma" Out of interest have you read ...

I absolutely love the title, Crossroads, a perfect name for a romantic novel. I really enjoyed you're writing too but you need to really look through and re-read things before ...

Brilliant! I really liked this. I enjoy this type of writing, with the dragons and danger but not so much that it scares you out you're seat. I liked the ...