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Carla had absolutely no idea what she was getting herself into, no idea. The situation was beyond comprehension. She hadn’t cried yet; she thought she was going to, but she ...

hello, Cannonball! I would just like to say, did you use a translator for the English version? I don't think you did, and if you didn't wow. Absulutly brilliant english. ...

Heya Zee, This is a curious piece of writing, I lover the era and your great way that you write. It's really fantasic! Just a few NitPicks :) the armoured ...

I don't know why I'm scared I've been here before I've seen this room I've walked this floor I don't know why I'm afraid I'm sure I've been here before  ...

Hello sharitm2! I must day this, but your writing is so mature. Your use of language really excells what writing your age group should be writing with. The only problem ...

Hello Noelle, we meet again :) I must admix that... I LOVE Peter pan, him combined with Harry Potter where the two boys that got me to love reading! I've ...

Chapter Two: I own you. Life to Margret was just day after day, nothing unusual happened and that’s how she liked it to stay, if something unusual happened it disturbed ...

Heya! I think this poem was really good, really isightful, lovely! There is just one thing I don't understand... I don't understad what it's about. To me, reading it, it ...

Chapter TWELVE: JARED'S Disaster LOCATION: Train Station Jared swung his backpack over his back as he made his way through Glasgow city centre, there seemed to be a lot of ...

Haha, I have to admit, I LOVE THIS! I have never thought about it - ever. I have tried to wright the life of a chair and failed miserably, but ...

I thought this was actually very meaningful , I had never thought about how a voice, could make a difference. For such a nice piece, i think you might have ...

I really enjoy your writing, something about the way you write seems to be read of the page with such ease! It was truly a brilliant chapter with a great ...

This is really good, I love the interaction between the characters and how you described the human race, Cannot wait for more! xxxx

I know, A 15 year old writing over 16+ I've completely messed up the system! Haha x but you lovely people it does have some swear words and burlesque dancers, ...

I really like this! I think it's really good, I'm not that great reviewing Lyrics but I'll try... :) Your use of language is impressive, especially for lyrics, normally people ...