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Firstly, thank you SO much for the 'hands' instead of grasp suggestion! It really does make that stanza come alive in a much better way, as you said, it adds ...

Hi! Thank you so much for the review, and to everyone else who has reviewed this too. I find all the technical suggestions genuinely very helpful, and I can't thank ...

Thank you so much for yet another wonderful and inspiring review! You make me want to write a poem everyday, just to hear your thoughts on them! Love your reviews, ...

Your reviews are so kind and encouraging, I don't know how to thank you enough. And yep, you're absolutely right about the rhyme scheme again. As you've probably noticed by ...

Thank you so much for the wonderful review, and you are absolutely right about the rhyming problems. Thanks a lot for pointing them out. These poems were written so long ...

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Thank you so much for the review my dear! And I would be delighted to have you stalk me for as long as you please! :p

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This was so good, and the imagery so brilliant, that I haven't the slightest idea how to review it. I couldn't find anything I would have wanted to improve upon. ...

Hi there Miraly! I'm here to review your work. Firstly, I must say, this was really funny. Particularly the first part about Tom and Jerry, it had me in stitches! ...

Thank you so much for such a detailed review. And you are absolutely right on all counts. I have a hard time ending sentences where they should be ended, which ...

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Thank you so much for the kind review. I was worried that the constant zigzag between scenes of a peaceful home life and the war and chaos of the past ...