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Re: ~Addicting Poison - chapter 4~
Okay, let me take a hit at this story. I haven't read it yet, so I'll comment/critique as I read along. I haven't read the first chapters, so I won't ...
Feb 15, 2009 -
Re: Split Personalities 3.1
Okie-dokie. Let's see if I can help. I critique as I read along, excuse my confusion. It’s dark and stormy night, thunder thriving in the background. I have to say, ...
Feb 14, 2009
