Evanesce

I really like this poem. Well worded and I absolutely loved the ending. Keep on writing, you got talent!

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Okay, let me take a hit at this story. I haven't read it yet, so I'll comment/critique as I read along. I haven't read the first chapters, so I won't ...

I'll just give you names off the top of my head. Girl: Angelica, Lola, Sally, Lucielle Boy: Evan, Oliver, Ian, Devin A Dad: Lou, Peter, William, Mike

Ugh. Well, first off I don't care if it's showing or telling, just if you get the message across, in my opinion. My main purpose in writing is to let ...

David Cook. All of his songs. Hands down. Viva La Vida - Coldplay. I love that song, and it's currently my favorite. American Boy - Estelle. I am listening to ...

I don't want to see the movie, personally. I remember reading the book last year, and can only remember tidbits. But seeing the commercials it looks totally different from the ...

Sorry, peeps, but it's E. Cullen for me. Mr. Darcy's too old for me... Yet, Cullen is waaaaaaaaaaayyyyyyyyyyyy old. Um. *confused*

Oh, excuse me. I have mixed up your story with another. Forget the thing I said about living next to a killer. Sorry for that.

Okie-dokie. Let's see if I can help. I critique as I read along, excuse my confusion. It’s dark and stormy night, thunder thriving in the background. I have to say, ...