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Evander

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  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: irl

    so i love this

    May 7, 2016
  • Poetry » Supernatural, Romantic Re: Falling In Love With A Jesuit Vampire At Her Aunt's House! What??? Absolute Craziness!!!/True Love!! (Parts 1, 2, 3, 4, and 5 please read!)

    oMGGGGGGGGGG!!!!!!!!! this is the best thing that you've written EVUR. i didn't know that you actually loved vampirE ROAMNCES!!!!!!! pls write a part six seveneight andnine pls plzz plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

    Apr 2, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Dissonance «1»

    Heyo! I guess that the fact that Katin's hard of hearing would be difficult to catch if Lareine had only hinted at it once in the passing, but it had ...

    Mar 31, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Fantasy Re: Dreams of Stars Chapter 21 (Once Upon a Time)

    That might be it! My dad tends to talk somewhat technically too. (I, uh, adopted that and managed to sound formal to the point where people didn't believe I was ...

    Mar 25, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Fantasy Re: Dreams of Stars Chapter 17 (Once Upon a Time)

    *at least it's very, very unlikely.

    Mar 11, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Fantasy Re: Dreams of Stars Chapter 17 (Once Upon a Time)

    Feel free to paraphrase or alter what they say enough to the point where you aren't copying word for word. That's what I tend to do with my Harry Potter ...

    Mar 11, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Fantasy Re: Dreams of Stars Chapter 2 (Once Upon a Time)

    ...I was going to save all of my comments for when I caught up but D: This chapter was sad. A good kind of sad. But still very sad.

    Mar 9, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Fantasy Re: Dreams of Stars Chapter 15 (Once Upon a Time)

    Ah, I guess I'll have to rewatch a little bit of the show then! I got past the Wicked Witch and the Snow Queen and then I just stopped. I ...

    Mar 9, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: No Romance: Chapter 21, Part 2

    Hey, Mad! Thanks for the review~ While this might be a bit far into the story, there's probably a lot more to talk about than just grammar and typos. Also, ...

    Feb 28, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Teen Fiction Re: No Romance: 20: Captain's Log

    Thanks for the review!

    Feb 12, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: No Romance: Chapter 19

    Thank you so much for this review!

    Feb 9, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Action / Adventure Re: No Romance: Chapter 1

    Thank you for the review! If you could tell me, how do I make my main character sound less mature? I'm always told that she sounds older, but I'm not ...

    Feb 9, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Days of January- Chapter One

    it's totally not a superpower. everyone is a mind reader, of course.

    Feb 5, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, General Re: Silence is Silver, Ch. 1

    OMGGGG!!!! this is the bEst review i've ever Gotten!!!!!! thx so muuuch!!!!!! lolZOR, ill be a beter riter becuz of this!!!111111!!!! thx again, sox2 much

    Feb 4, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: No Romance: Chapter 17

    Hey, Steggy! Nah, my narrator isn't jealous. She's just extremely angry because her life, career, and basically everything is on the line because Luke keeps on catering to Brett. Luke ...

    Feb 4, 2016


I wonder if people felt the freedom in our culture to love louder, if they'd be quicker to say "I miss you" when the absence of someone is felt instead of just thinking it.
— soundofmind