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Hey! I've read all of the previous chapters and I'm back here for another review! Just because I thought to look this up, the actor who played Jiminy Cricket is ...

Hey! I haven't read the earlier chapters, so I apologize if some of this review is out of place. It's been a little while since I watched the show too. ...

Hey! Back here with another review. The plot is really turning now. At the start of this, I had assumed that this book would be a typical detective story, but ...

Hey! I'm back with another review. I think one of my biggest things I have to say about this chapter is why ? While Joanne's motivation for doing all of ...

Hey! I really do this like this chapter! It gets into the action and introduces a new character. It also shows us that Joanne is typically adventuress and goes for ...

Hey! I saw chapter three in the Green Room, so I'm here to review chapter one. Alright, so the first 250 words of your manuscript are going to be what ...

Hey! The character interaction in this is pretty nice. It's great to see some of Anna and Sam interacting with each other -- hopefully their reasons for being arch rivals ...

Hey! Things are finally in the works. While there wasn't much about her father this chapter, it was nice to see Samantha interacting with Eva. Hopefully there will be some ...

Hey, dogsrule! The introduction, while great at introducing the protagonist, wasn't all that great at being the first paragraph to the story. Basically, there are many different ways to begin ...

hey, Eternal! Adrian back with another review. I actually didn't expect for Pandie to be a daughter of Apollo, but I'll explain my thought process behind it: Before Percy Jackson ...

Hey, Eternal! Adrian here with a review. I've skimmed through the previous chapters, so I have a bit of an insight to what's going on here. As far as this ...

Hey, Ats! Adrian here for another review. This chapter was the bomb diggity. It had action, character interaction, and a sense of purpose other than just being an introduction. It ...

Hey! I'm here for a quick review. I'll start out by saying that the first paragraph was good and it did make me want to read on. It was very ...

Hey, Hope! I'm back with another review. The story is progressing, certainly! Adi attacked Steve and now he might be broken. To be perfectly honest, I have no idea where ...

Hey, Hope! I love anything that has to do with Steve Rogers and the Avengers, so I'm here for a review! While the first paragraph has an interesting set up, ...