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Re: New personnel!
Thanks! Already beginning to get used to it just at first i was scared of posting in the wrong places and stuff!Ah well! xxx
Jul 23, 2008 -
Re: Breathing
I didn't understand what it was about but I still really liked it! It had good description and I felt it flowed well. The meaning could be clearer but I ...
Jul 23, 2008 -
Re: The Storm
I liked it. ALOT. There is so much atmosphere, I feel like I'm there. And I can relate to it. I know that sounds weird but I often just want ...
Jul 23, 2008 -
Re: New personnel!
Hey! My nave is Alice and I am a new member... I am not really used to forums so get slightly confused about how to find my way around the ...
Jul 23, 2008 -
Re: Secrets
I really liked this, though I do have a few small corrections/criticisms/whatever you want to call them. They aren't anything to do you with you writing really, just things you ...
Jul 18, 2008 -
Re: Summer storms
Summer storms The sky glowers. A breath of wind sifts through the heavy air, brushing the windows with cool. The air is warm, pressing, almost solid, against the ground, Tension ...
Jul 17, 2008
