Evaeva

Really nice! just a few lines I thought could maybe be improved though on the whole you used the structure well. the rhymes weren't obstructing which is very promising! Here ...

I know this is not strictly a poem, its more prose poetry but it fits more here than anywhere else. This is a memory of friday night practice in the ...

This is a very very first draft. Please tell me what you like and dont like etc. Montana I love the place where we get up in the black, muted ...

heya! I really like this poem. I read your first draft of it (or whichever the other one was) but I definitely think this is better. There is more meaning ...

yay! I have had some criticism for using religion and references to god in some of my poems but im glad that other people do it too. Also, I really ...

A memory Footsteps dragging, The feeling of comfort waning as I get further away. The quick flickers of the past slow. The memories fading… A pair of rough stone gates, ...

I know that this is a bit of an odd poem. It is so because at first it was from a exersize I did when we pointed with our eyes ...

Its very short which makes it very refreshing from some of the other poetry i have read recently. I like it. It feels like one of those little bites of ...

wow! It was so real! I really felt in that piece that the person speaking was experiencing it all and that she had a past, and a future to come, ...

SILENCE The silence before. Focused on what is to come, the anticipation, expectant, waiting. When to begin? When the silence grows to its climax, too much for the ears and ...

I know exactly what you mean and you manage to describe it in ways i never would have imagined. I think it's really good! It runs smoothly, despite the different ...

you must be musical. I live music and i can tell that you know how it feels to be that completely absorbed in the rhythm and harmony. You capture it ...

This is a short story I wrote for english coursework 2 years ago. Unfortunately it wasn't accepted because it was too far over the word limit but anyway! EDWARD It ...

Hey! That was interesting, a very new idea, I've never even thought about that before. I know what you mean about not being sure if it's poetry or not. I ...

the picture feels like a dream... it's sketchy but still shows a lot. I really like it! Well Done! Alice xxx