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Re: silent Hill: Requiem- chapter 3
Hello again, I have finished reading this chapter and..., -The mysterious leg. In the last chapter I know you mentioned that Beth was assaulted by the gory thing in the ...
Jan 7, 2009 -
Re: silent Hill: Requiem- chapter 2
Hello Maki-chan, Just read this and; -The door. A prison barred door had appeared. It wasn’t there before, but it didn’t matter . Please reconsider taking out or replacing the ...
Jan 7, 2009 -
Re: Silent Hill: Requiem- chapter 1
Hie, here I am again for the first chapter. There is this mixed emotion while reading your first chapter. I expect it to be written in third person after reading ...
Jan 7, 2009 -
Re: Silent Hill: Requiem- prologue
Though I'm not a very big fan of fanfics but since I really love horror and mystery, I'll give your story a try. It's good but there are a few ...
Jan 7, 2009 -
Re: Forked (3)
Cool another forked :D I just have to come and read this one. Anyway it is a nice story and better than the last one but there's a few things ...
Dec 9, 2008 -
Re: Like a Fish: Chapter One
Very neat, a tarot themed story. Although I have no clue as to where this story might lead to but i had a very good hint that things would get ...
Dec 8, 2008 -
Re: Calcium Hydroxide (Ca(OH)2)
You might want to divide and state the compounds that made up Calcium Hydroxide, its common name, the common usage for it, the industrial usage and the hazards of exposure ...
Dec 6, 2008 -
Re: The Perfect Murder
Hie xXChemicalsAttractXx, There is one thing i would like to say about the story; I was not mad but quite sane actually I screamed to myself in my perfectly sane ...
Dec 5, 2008 -
Re: Forked (2)
Great, another installment of the forked series. I think by now I'm officially a fan. Neat work man. It really intrigues me while hurting my stomach at the same time. ...
Dec 5, 2008 -
Re: Train Wreck Chapter one
Hie twilightxd, I've read through your story. It's a nice one and make me smile :) So here are a few things I find in your story that need modifying; ...
Dec 4, 2008 -
Re: Forked (1)
I'll leave the grammar for someone else. I just wanted you to know I really dig this story. It is so funny and unique. (I had to have my mirror ...
Dec 3, 2008 -
Re: Ghost - Chapter one.. or two..
Hey AlexMc, I've gone through the story and find a few sentences that I think awkward, How much he had bought Setharos for he did not know I think you ...
Dec 3, 2008 -
Re: S.c.r.a.t.c.h
Nice, I love the story; a very well written piece. I wanted to know more about Devyn. The story is intriguing :) I wanna know what happen next, Pm me ...
Dec 3, 2008