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KJ, Thanks, thanks, thanks ^_^ I'm in the middle of editing this piece, so any feedback is useful. Ehm, well, theoretically, since I lost the papers on which I had ...

Aw, but see, I can’t exactly answer that question, since I don’t really (no specifics) know where you are going with this (turning point reference). I only ever know what ...

Ashley - you remind me that I have a lot of stuff of my own to revise… I cringe at the very thought. I mean, I’m halfway, but it’s torture. ...

Amal - thanks for reading, and the comment :) fallenangel - thanks, thanks, thanks :)

OnCeUpOnAtIm3Xo, Thanks for reading, and the review, too. Though I think a reason was added (mentioned?) at some point. Again, thanks. Cheers!

Holly, Thanks, thanks, thanks again : ) I am so very in your debt. I made the necessary corrections, and will probably be cutting out the teddy bear part. That ...

What? Seven? What?! I... I... I don't like this. *tiny, tiny voice. I want to read chapter seven, too... Now. And I echo KJ's last sentence.

Icaruss - I made the most necessary changes have been made, and hopefully smoothened out the dialogue at some points. The bigger picture is being worked on, though how I’ll ...

Icaruss, Random Thought #137: You do know that you are the second person who thought, at first, that this is indeed about them, the older “woman“ and younger “man“, as ...

No, actually I didn't :) It's criminals that I don't like - romances are okay, in my book. So I'll probably have to get my hands on them in the ...

Ashley, Thanks, thanks, thanks for critiquing, because all comments are needed and appreciated. Thanks for your time! As to continuations, though… I don’t think there will be one. This was ...

It wasn't bad - far from that. It's just that I keep comparing to the first installment... But you are a very good writer, and so I feel myself excused ...

Yes, it is much better now. Those asterisks - such tiny, tiny details - really do a lot, not only visually, but also content-wise. The reader no longer has the ...

Okay, critiqued no 2. Heh... and extension isn't allowed.

Okay. I took out that part, and edited that “speech”. I reckoned that if we’re having this discussion, then I really should. Any better now? Again, thanks for all you ...