Esmé

If you format, more people will read it.

Chapter Two Medea was taken aback by the change that had taken place in her patient over the night. Well, well, she thought, amused. -A thief, and a good one, ...

You should start from a series in Tortall (Like the lioness quarter). -But that's just my opinion, Haha, my fave series, in case you didn't notice, lol. -elein (Yes, that ...

More people will read and critique this if you capitalize your 'I's and add some punctuation. -elein

Hm... I don't know much about autism, I was writing my critique from my point of view, to tell you the truth... My main point was that it isn't too ...

Okay, I’ll critique your story if you want, lol. I’ll be correcting mistakes as I go: Quote: “Time for you to go home my boy.” The familiar grumpy voice said. ...

Woo hoo, I'm on chapter two xD One thing is bothering me though: Are all those retrospections necessary?I'm thinking of cutting of the last one. Maeybe something more, i don't ...

No, I haven't read it yet, but I'm dying to, lol. Is it good? I'll have to order it, I think. And then wait, wait, wait, wait.... -elein P.S. Is ...

Thanks, thanks, thanks, thanks - this can go on and on, lol. I'm currently working on something else, though I'm printing this out, hehe. (Got to write while I still ...

Ah, nickname! The word I was searching for… Thanks for reading this, I really appreciate it! I love you guys. Need I say more, lol? -elein P.S. I have no ...

Chapter One Darkness all around her, and amidst of it all was the pain. Everything hurt her, every bone seemed to be broken, every muscle was throbbing. –But that became ...

Okay, I mean it is your story after all, :) We can have different opinions, lol. -elein

Yeah, mine too. I liked the Alanna, Kel and Diane series the most. The Circle is okay, but somehow I never took to it as much as I did to ...

Okay, first of all, thanks for taking your time and reading this. As to the lack of details... Well, this is a prologue, lol. I suppose that I'll explain it ...

She's oficially thirteen now :) -Welcome to the club, lol! quote: The flames were almost licking my face, and any closer I would be burning my toes. The last part ...