Esmé

You said not to point out every little g. and s. mistake, but I’m afraid that at some points I have to. Use spell check if you have to. A ...

Firstly, I wanted to say that I really liked the story - is there going to be a continuation? =) They way that you showed Gertrude’s thoughts was both interesting ...

The first thing that I noticed when I started to read your story is the lack of apostrophes. Generally, it makes a better impression if your spelling and grammar is ...

When I see something of this length, I usually get discourages, lol. However, I made myself at lest start reading your work, and later I just had to finish it ...

Lol - Leo Tolstoy? LEO? The translated version of his name seems funny to me somehow... In polish its Lew Tołstoj, but I bet that for a Russian THAT would ...

Okay, so here it goes (bear with me, this is my first review): -I think that you should work on punctuation. -Also, try describing the emotions of your characters a ...