User avatar

Esmé

  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The murderer

    Hey, I don’t usually critique poetry. In fact, I rarely do, and instead come in here in secret never to write any review, lol. Poetry just scares me. But we ...

    Sep 7, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, General Re: Needles and Roses - Chap. 8

    KJ, Well, I don’t have much to say, but I, er, want this to somehow count as a review, you know? I do, lol. I considered writing paeans, actually, but ...

    Sep 1, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Book 1 (prologue)

    blackfairiwings, First of all, hello, welcome to YWS! I hope you’ll like it here^^ It’s an awesome, awesome site, and I hope you’ll stay and keep posting (; But, to ...

    Aug 17, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, General Re: ~Michelangelo's Night and Day~Chapter Nine

    Ahsley, So it’s been two months (well, now more, no?) since I’ve read MND? My, how time goes by… *Esme ponders on that fact for a moment. Quote: When I ...

    Aug 17, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: An Apple and a Graveyard - Chap. 10

    KJ, Ello! *smiles. But, but, where’s Chapter Ten? Once more I was lost, and this time the portfolio tactic didn’t work. Lol. But then I went back. And actually read. ...

    Aug 16, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: An Apple and a Graveyard - Chap. 9

    KJ - Chapter Nine! *** Quote: “All of my things aren’t exactly from the ‘living world stuff’ as you put it. Comma. Quote: I guess I should’ve explained. Guess I ...

    Aug 16, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: An Apple and a Graveyard - Chap. 8

    KJ - More or less flawless chapter, so this will be really short. Quote: “Let’s stop here,” Caiden surprised me by saying. Sounds a little awkward to me, but it ...

    Aug 16, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: An Apple and a Graveyard - Chap. 7

    KJ, Yes, Chapter 6 was amongst By Sun, By Moon. Queer, no? But, it’s seven that counts now, and with seven we now continue (: *** Quote: and even if ...

    Aug 16, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: An Apple and a Graveyard - Chap. 6

    KJ, Er. There’s no Chapter 6! I mean, there is, now, but I couldn’t access it through Ch 5. Anyone ever told you that Esme is totally unprepared to for ...

    Aug 16, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: An Apple and a Graveyard - Chap. 5

    KJ - Lol, this is going pretty fast, isn’t it? But it’s so awesome! *** Quote: Like while I was sleeping, I was aware that I was sleeping. Very nice ...

    Aug 16, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: An Apple and a Graveyard - Chap. 4

    KJ - Here again, ‘cause I can’t stay away. Wonderful tale you’re spinning here. *** Quote: It was more torturous than standing outside and getting bit by mosquitoes over and ...

    Aug 16, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: An Apple and a Graveyard - Chap. 3

    KJ, Greetings once more^^ I’m just gobbling up you chapters (: *** Quote: And after walking aimlessly for a while, hoping for a sight of some fortune-telling shop, I realized ...

    Aug 16, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: An Apple and a Graveyard - Chap. 2

    KJ, Ello. Ch. 2, which I also read way, way back, shall now be formally critiqued (: **** Quote: And as I sat up, I saw there were not any ...

    Aug 16, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: An Apple and a Graveyard - Chap. 1

    KJ, Hello (: I know this has been out for quite some times, but it seems I rarely actually critique something right away. I mean, I read it when it ...

    Aug 16, 2008
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Lesser of Two Evils

    Sworddance, Oooh, vampires! You should have me hooked for that reason alone, lol, since I’ve been nursing an obsession for quite some time. Rubs hands together* Quote: The body dropped ...

    Aug 16, 2008


The chains of habits are too light to be felt until they are too heavy to be broken.
— Warren Buffet