Esmé

Ah, time present? Horrid little thing that it is, lol. Sorry, but I’m going to avoid making corrections when it comes to times, okay? I’m going to write the critique ...

I agree with Jenita in the subject of your beginnig. It was some sort of contrast to what happens later. -elein

Also, he's of age now? Why don;t you describe what he's feeling etc? Talk a bit more about Voldemort. And, this is the beggining of book seven? JK Rowling always ...

Rosethorn, where exactly are we getting to? Beause I have no idea what I'm writing. Seriously. -Maybe we should discuss about the making o the gem. Lets give it a ...

Quote: One, solitary bird, an owl, flew over the street, meandering over treetops and telegraph poles towards the second house, number four. Ah, the ‘comma, number four’ phrase… Absolutely love ...

This is chapter six? I haven’t read anything of your’s before, so forgive me if I start to ask completely stupid questions concerning the fable, lol. I’ll write the critique ...

I added the death scene of Ileane (the Fairy Queen). Is this okay with every one? -elein

Anaisathy watched. She was a patient observer, used to years of stillness and doing nothing but thinking up threats. An interesting pair, that Rhyannon and Matthias... Interesting indeed... A smirk ...

Hell

“Are you implying that history should repeat itself?” Isadell stretched in the armchair, carefully eyeing her speaker. “You want to work together?” The flicker’s in Avril’s eyes made the a

Ok, np :)

Ok, np :)

"I'm barely hanging on. -Literarily." -Falls.

Was skimming through zour storz and: quote: We have time, my lord. The manticore replied, we may be late, but we shall destroy them none the less. Wouldn't it be ...

You know what? This is genius. Pure genius. I personally use the combination of 4 and 5. Uhm, though my mom still looks at me kind of um... weirdly (is ...