Esmé

Okay, I mean it is your story after all, :) We can have different opinions, lol. -elein

Yeah, mine too. I liked the Alanna, Kel and Diane series the most. The Circle is okay, but somehow I never took to it as much as I did to ...

Okay, first of all, thanks for taking your time and reading this. As to the lack of details... Well, this is a prologue, lol. I suppose that I'll explain it ...

10/10 - Loved the movie (first one), Sparrow was my fave character, lol.

After quoting Kitkat I have nothing to add, lol. -elein

Update: I meant to write Amathery's Eye, lol -Anathery's Eye? -Aleythery's Eye? Eh, choices, choices...

Prologue, Chapter One + The Updated, Chapter Two Prologue It was a beautiful night. The silky darkness which crept into the place of day was lightened by the sparkling stars ...

She's oficially thirteen now :) -Welcome to the club, lol! quote: The flames were almost licking my face, and any closer I would be burning my toes. The last part ...

Amethery's Eye? Athalay Stone? Any suggestions people? I'd go with the ruby. You know, there's a drop of blood involve din making the stone? cackles evily* -elein

Hey, why do you wanna foil my plans??????????? No one understands Anaisathy, no one. Oh, yeah, you take her for granted. She's evil, yes, evil so she's evil. (What a ...

Yup! Witcher in English -shudders*

Hey, this is only the beginning, isn't it? Other Angels can still come... -elein

yeah o.k. bad first attempt but i'll try again! Hey, it wasn't that bad, lol. -But that's the attitude, I'll keep my fingers crossed for you! -elein

I actually liked the repetition of 'she'. It gave the text its own unique style, in my opinion. That was a very short text, but I liked it. I know, ...

Oops, I suppose I didn't tell you what exactly was confusing, did I? Sorry. :) -Minor, but scattered all ove the text mistakes are a problem here -You changed times. ...