Esmé

I quote Myth here, lol. When I reread my own work I tend to see what I want to see, that is what I wanted to write initially, lol. What ...

More people will read and critique this if you capitalize your 'I's and add some punctuation. -elein

\quote: I’m sitting in my mothers room at present, it isn’t a pretty room, far from it in fact. I would turn the first comma into a period. A bit ...

Quote: It definitely wasn’t the grime we had last night. Grime was a basic food for slaves and peasants like me. You have ‘grime’ two times. Quote: I swallowed, then ...

I am currently learning about daggers, lol. And if anyone could answer my tongue question in the Research section it would be great xD -But, not wanting to only litter ...

Hm... I don't know much about autism, I was writing my critique from my point of view, to tell you the truth... My main point was that it isn't too ...

Ha, yes, i followed the link. Great site xD

When starting a new fantasy novel, how much time do you take for world building? List every single race, write down their characteristics? Do you do a lot of research? ...

Granted. You're points are 0000000000. (That's because you have a bug, hehe). I wish I were a published writer, lol -elein

So, the review is supposed to be here or there? Okay, I’ll critique your story if you want, lol. I’ll be correcting mistakes as I go: Quote: “Time for you ...

Okay, I’ll critique your story if you want, lol. I’ll be correcting mistakes as I go: Quote: “Time for you to go home my boy.” The familiar grumpy voice said. ...

If it's a story than why don't you post it in the fiction section? The Writer's Corner is more to talk about your story and how the story is going ...

Woo hoo, I'm on chapter two xD One thing is bothering me though: Are all those retrospections necessary?I'm thinking of cutting of the last one. Maeybe something more, i don't ...

Okay, I’m writing something new, so I’ll do the test again: 1) Happens, happens. This is my innovation, lol. 25) No idea. Is it so obvious? 0_o 27) Uhm… Depends ...

The whole wiedzmin (witcher? What a word) series by Sapkowski. One of my fave authors!!!!!!!!!! -elein