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You should post this to fantasy, or something. This forum is more for talking ABOUT what you're writing than posting it. -elein

I'm reading Stroud now. Just read the first book, I liked it, trying to get my hands on the the other books. -elein

Lol, welcome to YWS, hope you have fun. Yes, if you post your work you will probably get some critiques. If you have any questions, feel free to PM me, ...

Yes! I think it would sound better with the 'that'. Here I was thinking about it about fifteen minutes, and then Luna comes and... *Shakes head in amazement*

But it reaches the point, does it not?

Fantasyyyyyyyyy !!! Fantasy, my love. Lol.

Quote: The looking-glass, if it could be called that, had a bulky border with leaf designs and a black grille protected it from curious hands wishing to touch the smooth ...

Thanks and thanks, lol -elein

Unclear sentence alert = is unclear to me. Means it at some point looses sense, either gramatically or in any other way a sentence can loose sense. E.g: quote: But ...

I'm not really sure if this isn't supposed to be in research, but it does link with fiction, doesn't it? Lol, I suppose I should ask my question first: Can ...

What everyone said, lol. Guess I don't have much to add. Hope you have fun, -eleinasari

Nooooo.... I just came up with a new plot !!! Lol. And he's better when dead.

If you format, more people will read it.

Quote: "Well this is certainly something." Jon said blankly after seeing the small dorm him and Liza would be sharing. Dialogue punctuation: comma instead of a period after ‘something’. Also, ...

*Eyes wide* Awesome article, really (though I guess you know that, hehe). I'm going to print it out, lol, and contemplate a bit over it. Maybe I'll finally write a ...