Esmé

Okay, so I’m finally writing some kind of a critique for you , lol. Really sorry it took me so long, I didn’t have lot of free time lately. Looks ...

8/10 I like it, but the eye thing is getting on my nerves, lol xD

10/10 Love all your avatars, hehe.

Quote: Grinning, I threaded my fingers into my scarf. I kind of didn’t get that. You can thread your fingers? -Not meant to be ironic or anything, I just don’t ...

I added it to the top

Read it ^_^ Or its translation, anyways. I admit, at some parts I got pretty bored and skipped a few pages, lol.

Shiny, shiny, shiny! Ace, I want shiny! - Cat Uhm, well, who doesn't? - Ace Would you rather die as a hero or peacefully in your bed?

As always, I thank, thank, thank you for your time :) Yeah, I know that there was not much going on and it's botehring me a bit, lol. I guess ...

Your poll: Mabey=maybe? I agree with most of xtenx's comment, so I won't repeat anything here. What kind of made me want to stop reading on the very begining was ...

Vegetable

Hi, welcome to YWS, hope you have fun !!! If you have anz questions, feel free to PM me, elein

Acelyn Prologue A thin, frail looking woman, a shawl tight around her arms, turned to the man next to her. “Alaise is dead,” she whispered, her voice hoarse. “Look!” Clouds ...

Myth, you are a genius !!! Really, you are. First of all, I would again like to thank you for taking your time and reading this. I edited more or ...

This didn't really catch my interest either... This was really short, and it is really hard to write anything besides a first impression. It was short AND abrupt, which, at ...

Sapkowski's books about the Witcher (what a word!) Anyways, they are absolutely brilliant. He has elves, magic, itd. but it's not how you usually get it. Oh, read one of ...